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blahh I hate how this page came out. Tried to experiment a bit with the background style and it came out... kinda shitty. Plus, this scene is painfully awkward and I despise the dialogue

Note: I'm doing this comic for fun and it's not intended to be good quality. I'm writing it solely for enjoyment, so please don't mind if it's kind of a mess :') 

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SleepySundae Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I think the layout turned out just fine.  Only in the last panel did I read the bubbles backwards at first.  

Anyway, I notice that these strangers didn’t necessarily ask if they wanted to go with them.  Half expecting the next page to have him say “let me rephrase, you’re coming with us.”
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weallstilldie Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2018  Student General Artist
oof, I should probably pay more attention to my speech bubble placement ^^; 
And,,, this scene is not written very well, I'll admit, since I was mostly writing it on the spot and this scene was where I kind of ran into an weird spot where I wasn't sure how to continue it, so it's awkward all the way... but I started planning the story more since I made this page and the next.
So, I'll say this scene ends kinda abruptly on the next page, but I'm gonna try to avoid writing awkwardly ending scenes after this ;_; 
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