Wound up, can't sleep, can't do anything right ...
For those of you who just came in, Other Vengeance 2.0 is a Beast Wars-based Transformers-as-Humans story, ensemble cast, infrequently updated. It's got a faction truce, assorted Vokery, the occasional corpse, acknowledgement of the human condition being rather sticky and messy, and random acts of Shakespeare. There is an FAQ.
For those of you who've been playing along, it's eleven days after the change - and the last seven days have been solid rain. It's been like three years for you readers, but four days for the Cybertronians since This Most Bloody Piece Of Work and This, And What Needful Else.
Chapter five synopsis: It finally stops raining. Inferno makes two big ( unrelated ) discoveries, Megatron and Blackarachnia go digging around a Vok site, and Airazor and Cheetor try to find everyone's luggage. Also a completely unfair, utterly self-indulgent scene wherein Dinobot and Megatron argue in Richard III quotes.
Yes, there was a name shamelessly stolen from a New Adventures of He-Man character. In my defence, it was perfect.
Link to Other Vengeance 2.0 - Someone I Forgot
Or link to the Other Vengeance 2.0 archive, if you want to start from the beginning.
Process notes: Working on Chapter Six now. Had to rearrange the timeline and shuffle some chapters around for general logic and story flow. Now things make more sense in terms of stuff people ought be reacting to in what order.