IMO I disagree with flipado. That type of expression (more agressive and both eyes showing) would change the photograph all together into a different feel. This has the feel of trapped inocence, the youth trying to break free of the pasts ties perhaps. This is a very nice capture you did a very good job. I even like the contrast on the metal chain and the deep of field. Nice job
The ideia is great, tough i think she should've a more agressive stance. IE, mouth shut, or snarling or smtg more agressive. The other eye should be in view as well ( imo offcourse ), and other than that, its quite good. Love the focus on her eyes.. Could'be a tad sharper tough.