To those of you who saw the previous ending: I took it out for =bekkia
's story contest, but I AM thinking of another way to end it than just obliterating my old idea.
The end seems so melodramatic. I want it to be affecting, obviously, and it is
dramatic, but I don't want it over the top.
What do you think? Your feedback's super appreciated.
Part One - [link]
Part Two - [link]
Part Three - [link]
Part Four - [link]