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I'm not a professional but, I want to critique so I can at least help you improve your art skills, sorry if it's too harsh this is my own opinion but I do study art as a hobby. The figure of the girl is slightly stiff and the background(sky) is, how do i say, a bit empty. Overall the rendering is good but the right arm looks a bit flat you might want to add like a cross contour line on the forearms just to give it a little depth , the way you blur the back ground to make the figure POP is really smart and your anatomy is accurate, no correction for that.

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RoanNna Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2019  Professional Digital Artist
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stars - free to use by ScourgeMangaStudios Hello WalkingPogostick ! stars - free to use by ScourgeMangaStudios 
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Thank you so much for +fav my work up Arrow Up hereArrow Up  ! 
I believe that each artist leaves a tiny piece of his soul for every work done and I´m glad that mine is in good hands. Llama Emoji-62 (Rawr I'll get you) [V3] 
Good luck and may the inspiration be with you:omgomgbb: 
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louverusee Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you so much for the watch! Happy New Year!
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JD1975 Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2018

Thanks for the Watch mate & Merry Christmas.

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Ultimate-Psycho Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2018  Hobbyist Photographer
Thanks a lot for the watch :)
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abmajor1 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2018  Hobbyist Photographer
Thanks for the watch!  We both appreciate it!  :)
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richten Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks for the fav and the watch :salute:
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Romer-Kreatrix Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2018  Professional Traditional Artist
Heya Pogo.
Thanks a lot for the +watch.
I really appreciate that you like my art.
You should consider joining www.patreon.com/kreatrixxx .
For one dollar you'll get access to all of my best and hottest pics, even hardcore ones.
Thanks again, have a Llama and a nice day.
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ikelag Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you for the watch! ;)
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nielsphoto Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2018  Hobbyist Photographer
You watched :| (Blank Stare) When might we see some of your work? :| (Blank Stare)  
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nielsphoto Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2018  Hobbyist Photographer
and you faved

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