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Chronicles of Arcea - Dialogues (English):

Page 12:
_ Ah, good morning Intendant ! Tell me quickly if everything went for the best in my absence. Is problem particularly ripe disturb preparations for the council?
_ Absolutely nothing noteworthy that is not already solved, master.
_ Good ... Hum ... Perfect.
_ I will have a few more guests who arrive tonight. They will be three ... And for the umpteenth time, stop call me master!
_ ... In this case, I will let them prepare rooms, and alert kitchens. And, as expected Astrée Dame will be with us tonight ... I think nothing forgotten ...
Oh yes. One thing: you have an unrehearsed visit. The person waiting for you in the common room since yesterday. It hasn't budged since, in the hope of seeing you.
_ And who is this? That wish?
_ A young woman, a human enough ... "Elvish", which wishes to become an apprentice with us.
_ A young woman? ...

Page 13 :
_ Be welcome to the tower Ausros. Our intendant warned me that you would like to become an apprentice with us. Miss ... ?
_ Dara Duir, but I have become accustomed, among elves, ti what I called Elwen. And indeed, I want to study magic to the city of mages.
_ Enchanté, Elwen. As you can suspect, for my part, I am the current Ausros archmage. Allart Del Amâs Orina, to welcome you and serve you.
But first, tell me the reasons why you want to study here.
_ Well ... In truth ... I am what one might call a sorcerer, but I live constantly in fear of losing control of my gifts. Some elvish sorcerers I met advised me to come to Ausros to find the help I need: I just find here the way to dominate the energies that rush sometimes into me.
_ This was an advice more than prudent ...
... And they were wise in guiding you so far.
_ Sages, Yes .. But secrets too. I know ... No, I feel that they don't have tell me all ...
_ ... Like you, at this moment, am I wrong? ... Don't lie, your eyes said much more than your words. And as any wise, you will reveal me all at the best time, right? ... So for the moment, the only things that worry me, there are these walls and the city around us ...

Les Chroniques d'Arcea - Dialogues (français):

Planche 12 :
_ Ah, bien le bonjour intendant ! Dites-moi vite si tout s'est déroulé pour le mieux pendant mon absence. Aucun problème particulier n'est venu troubler les preparatifs du conseil ?
_ Absolument rien de notable qui ne soit pas déjà réglé, maître.
_ Tant mieux ...Hum... Parfait.
_ J'aurai quelques invités de plus qui arriveront ce soir. Ils seront trois ... Et pour la enième fois, arrêtez de m'appeler maitre !
_ ... Dans ce cas, je vais leur faire preparer des chambres, et avertir les cuisines. Et, comme prévu dame astrée sera des nôtres ce soir... Je crois n'avoir rien oublié...
Ah si. Une chose : vous avez une visite impromptue. La personne vous attend dans la salle commune depuis hier. Elle n'en a pas bougé depuis, dans l'espoir de vous voir.
_ Et qui est-ce ? Que veut-elle ?
_ Une jeune femme, une humaine assez... "elfique", qui désirerait devenir apprentie chez nous.
_ Une jeune femme ? ...


Planche 13:
_ Soyez la bienvenue à la tour d'Ausros. Notre intendant m'a averti que vous souhaiteriez devenir apprentie parmi nous. Mademoiselle ... ?
_ Dara Duir,mais j'ai pris l'habitude, chez les elfes à ce qu'on me surnomme Elwen. Et en effet, je désire étudier la magie à la cité des mages.
_ Enchanté, Elwen. Comme vous pouvez vous en douter, pour ma part, je suis l'archimage actuel d'Ausros. Allart Del Amâs Orina, pour vous accueillir et vous servir.
Mais avant tout, dites-moi donc les raisons pour lesquelles vous souhaitez étudier ici.
_ Et bien... En vérité... Je suis déjà ce que l'on pourrait appeler une magicienne, mais je vis sans cesse dans la crainte de perdre le contrôle de mes dons. Des mages elfiques que j'ai rencontrés m'ont conseillée de venir à Ausros pour trouver l'aide dont j'ai besoin : j'espère juste trouver ici le moyen de dominer les énergies qui déferlent parfois à travers moi.
_ C'était un conseil plus qu'avisé...
...et ils ont été sages en vous guidant jusqu'ici.
_ Sages, Oui.. Mais secrets aussi. Je sais... Non, je sens qu'ils ne m'ont pas tout dit...
_ ... Tout comme vous, en cet instant, je me trompe ?... Ne mentez pas, votre regard en a dit bien plus que vos paroles. Et comme tout sage, vous ne me révélerez tout qu'au moment venu, n'est-ce pas ? ...Alors pour le moment, les seules choses qui m'inquiètent, ce sont ces murs et cette ville qui nous entourent...





Story inspired by Hundred Legacy, a board created by ~Melyna from a RP thread of ~Allart
Adapted and entirely re-written by *VyrL

Histoire inspirée d'Hundred Legacy, forum créé par ~Melyna d'après une trame RP de ~Allart
Adaptée et entièrement réécrit par *VyrL

Thanks to ~The-Kenshin who help me for the framing
Merci de m'avoir apporté ton oeil...

And to all the players of the board around Arcea who gived live to those characters.
et avec qui j'ai pris beaucoup de plaisir à jouer.
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:iconkatykawaiisnow:
KatyKawaiiSnow Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Such perfection!I envy your drawing ability!!  Heart :D (Big Grin) 
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Alphagoth Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Je viens de tomber sur tes oeuvres et.. je kiff. Il me faut cette BD!
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Vyrhelle-VyrL Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2015  Professional General Artist
Ravie que ça te plaise :D
Et si tu es intéressée par la BD, je t'invite à aller sur ma boutique en ligne où les deux premiers tomes sont disponibles à la vente ( voici le lien : vyrhelle.com/boutique )
En encore merci du compliment !
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Bandling45 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
C'est très bon, mais le texte est un peu petit. Bon travail! :)
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:iconvyrhelle-vyrl:
Vyrhelle-VyrL Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2013  Professional General Artist
C'est une vieille version des planches. Il y a moyen d'en voir quelques-unes en plus grand sur mon site officiel, dans cet album : vyrhelle.com/galerie/#photo=31…
Il est aussi possible de commander le tome entier sur ma boutique en ligne, puisqu'il est disponible sur papier depuis un peu plus d'un an. Le tome 2 sort d'ailleurs bientôt :aww:
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:iconbandling45:
Bandling45 Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Ah, d'accord. :D
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SnaiLords Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I wish you'd have a larger zoom in option.
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SnaiLords Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012  Student Digital Artist
That background <3
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gigi28 Featured By Owner May 18, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
ta bd est vraiment bien faite ,perso j'aime bien celui qui a des yeux jaunes!
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:iconvyrhelle-vyrl:
Vyrhelle-VyrL Featured By Owner May 19, 2012  Professional General Artist
Elwen ^^ C'est l'un des personnages principaux de l'histoire ^^
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:icongigi28:
gigi28 Featured By Owner May 20, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
ces yeux font penser un peu à vampire knight ^^
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TakataRikuzen Featured By Owner May 27, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
How long does a page take you??? Un-frikkin-believable design and details... My mouth is wide open and my teeth are all dry... heheh
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:iconvyrhelle-vyrl:
Vyrhelle-VyrL Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2011  Professional General Artist
well, when I can work only on it, a page take me a week to be done ^^
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:icontakatarikuzen:
TakataRikuzen Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hmmmm, my page takes me about a week too... It's nowhere as well done as yours...
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:iconvyrhelle-vyrl:
Vyrhelle-VyrL Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2011  Professional General Artist
:aww: mine wasn't good when I began ;)
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TakataRikuzen Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Your work is insanely good. Do you have them published, would like to look out for them in the shops!
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:iconvyrhelle-vyrl:
Vyrhelle-VyrL Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2011  Professional General Artist
The french release of the first chapter is for this winter ^^ ( the english version will follow quickly after )
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red-winged-angel Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ooohh~! So you actually made this series yourself? Wow!! Amazing! =O
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:iconvyrhelle-vyrl:
Vyrhelle-VyrL Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2011  Professional General Artist
Yes, I'm working on ^^
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red-winged-angel Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Very cool! ;D
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Luhkha Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2011
Je suis curieux de voir la suite. J'ai l'impression que ça manque un poil de dynamisme, mais c'est déjà très très bon !

Le dessin est vraiment superbe, comme d'habitude, et j'aime les effets de lumière et d'ombre. L'ambiance mysterieuse qui ressort des planches.

J'attend la sortie avec impatience.
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Vyrhelle-VyrL Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2011  Professional General Artist
Je travaille sur le dynamisme justement, je sais que c'est un de mes points faibles. Mais difficile d'en faire sur ces premières planches plutôt calmes ^^;

J'espère que je pourrai la publier bientôt ^^
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Dkelabirath Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2010  Professional General Artist
Beautiful.
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Vyrhelle-VyrL Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2010  Professional General Artist
thanks ^^
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Jesterelle Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2010
je viens juste de découvrir cette BD sur devArt, et je me demandée quant est ce qu'elle sort en vente?
Les dessins sont vraiment beaux! c'est toi qui fait les couleurs aussi?
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Vyrhelle-VyrL Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2010  Professional General Artist
Normalement printemps 2011. Si tout se passe bien. Et oui, je fais tout, couleurs comprises.
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Jesterelle Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2010
Tu as du courage de tout faire! t'est une vrai pro donc ^^
Attendre 2011 sera dur, lol.
C'est ta première BD?
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Vyrhelle-VyrL Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2010  Professional General Artist
Oui, c'est ma première BD éditée. J'en ai réalisées quelques unes par le passé, mais uniquement en amateur pour des fanzines. Je ne sais même pas où je les ai rangées d'ailleurs :XD:
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Thiefswipe Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2010  Student Writer
Oh, wait... is that french or spanish? ^^; Eheheh, I might have messed up in my other message. I'm sorry if I got it wrong!
:stupidme:
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Vyrhelle-VyrL Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2010  Professional General Artist
French :D
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Thiefswipe Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2010  Student Writer
Hmm... I love the artwork, but I can't read spanish, and therin lies the problem; the translation in the artists comments don't tell me who is talking! I could go and check back and forth between the author's comments and the comic, but by then, you lose all meaning and inflection behind the words that comes from simply reading them, and the character's personalities become compleltey blurred.

I hope you have time to read this! With artwork like this, you must get quite a large amount of comments.
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Vyrhelle-VyrL Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2010  Professional General Artist
I read it and I answer :D

I know the problem. But in a same time, the comics book will be published only in French. An English translation is not planed for the moment, even if I talk about with my editor, and I don't want DA English speakers hope for nothing. If an English translation is planed, I will add a English version of the pages ;)
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Thiefswipe Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2010  Student Writer
Alright. :) Now I'm gonna go take french classes :p Ok, not really, I'm already signed up for japanese. But you get my point. XD
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Vyrhelle-VyrL Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2010  Professional General Artist
:D
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Dhaundre Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2010
Masterwork man. Greatly done! I love the elven style on many places like the rook. And I like the story! I know enough french to read and figure out what's happening xD
Congrats from Madrid and looking forward for more of your work.
Cheers!
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Vyrhelle-VyrL Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2010  Professional General Artist
thank you very much for this nice comment ^^
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Aecelot Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2009
c'est supere. almost how i would draw it myself, xD. Do you think its perfect yet?

Aece
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Vyrhelle-VyrL Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2009  Professional General Artist
I already re-work a little on ^^; I never find my work "perfect", "good", but never "perfect" ^^;
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SkyePrints Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2009
This is amazing work! Is there a few english translations missing on some pages? I couldn't find some but the pictures them self tell the story as well..I really would like to follow this story.
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Vyrhelle-VyrL Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2009  Professional General Artist
Hum, all the translations are done. The only ones which doesn't have are the pages without any dialog. May be you didn't see that some translations are mixed with french version.
And for the story, if french edition find enough success, an english one culd be done later.
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ryoko25 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2009  Student Writer
Looking forward to more pages!
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:iconvyrhelle-vyrl:
Vyrhelle-VyrL Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2009  Professional General Artist
In the comics book ^^ Being patient, I'm still working on for the french release on summer 2010
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ryoko25 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2009  Student Writer
Aww... That's awesome for you, but *lives in the states*
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Vyrhelle-VyrL Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2009  Professional General Artist
If the french version find success, an english one could be done. I will know more on the months which are coming
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ryoko25 Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2009  Student Writer
Alright. Here's looking forward to an update.
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Vyrhelle-VyrL Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2009  Professional General Artist
Ok !
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jainaE Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Absolutely lovely! Keep up the beautiful work.
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Vyrhelle-VyrL Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2009  Professional General Artist
I do ! :D
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viral-reject Featured By Owner May 30, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Very very cool, I bet those backgrounds were hell to draw though.
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Vyrhelle-VyrL Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2009  Professional General Artist
A little bit, but I like to make backgrounds ;)
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