Armem Enlom Comic Pg 1

Armem Enlom, knee deep in her 'Rite of Passage' quest.

This is the first page of the webcomic I started about a year back, and only got to complete about six pages. After renewed interest, and better skills at hand I thought I would revisit this project. But there is always this nagging feeling you get about the older works that you could have done something better.

This is a remake of the first page I did then.
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For a comic, I know the amount of detail is a bit too much. But considering this is the first page, I want to give something to the reader to draw him/her into the story. The rest of the pages may not get this amount of color details, but I would be striving to put more details from illustration point of view.

All pages of Armem Enlom Comics: [link]