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God Key by Vymnis God Key by Vymnis
the show went crazy with lens flare so i figured why shouldn't i?!!??!
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:iconultimatekawaiichibi:
I love how your goal was to create fan art for the anime Rage of Bahamut.
Although you covered realism, you'll have to improve on your background.
Also, I believe that you should've gave both of the characters a glowing aura, or at least applied an overlay layer. Good job.
Another thing, It wasn't Micheal who blasted off one of her wings you know...
And if this is taking place after she obtained the God Key, she should be missing a wing, so you're missing a lot of accuracy in story and art.
I remember her having a tale, and to add on, Micheal, the one above her, had more of a really bright blondish hair color, as if his hair was almost white but had a little yellow color to it.
Last but not least, looking into the tiniest of detail, you made her right wing slightly bigger than the other, and you forgot her belly button.
Overall, it's still great.
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:iconle-vane:
Le-Vane Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
This is gorgeous! Love the lens flare, and especially the lighting on the metal. Wonderful job!
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:iconarasteia:
Arasteia Featured By Owner Edited Feb 25, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
A really cool angle on this one! But I feel as if the composition is slightly skewed with the topmost figure - perhaps it would go better a little further to one side rather than directly above her? 
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ButterAndJams Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2016  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Amazing!  I love the wings!
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:iconiduna-haya:
Iduna-Haya Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awesome ^^ Great pose and perspective
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:iconantaresnebula:
antaresnebula Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful work
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:iconkunanoda:
KunaNoda Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
awesome perspective!!!
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:iconsksuijilil:
sksuijilil Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
her battle suit is really nice!
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:iconxheather-annx:
XHeather-AnnX Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2016  Professional General Artist
Wonderfully done.
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:iconmiyuuhime:
MiyuuHime Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2016  Student Digital Artist
the composition is so cool, you really did a great job!
and the characters look so cool :D
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:iconkazxart:
KazXart Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
Very nice work of yours keep it up ^_^ 
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:icongreat-malboro:
Great-Malboro Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I love your pallet
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:iconguchi-girl1:
Guchi-Girl1 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
Wow that perspective is incredible! Keep up the great work! 
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:iconikeetart:
iKEETart Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nice attempt for fish cam effect, I believe. I keep working on it! 
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:iconreddomi:
Reddomi Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
really nice painting!
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:iconvexscape:
Vexscape Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Good point, but still TOO MUCH FLARE
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DragonMatterGames Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2016
watch for a watch?  This is really good also.
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:iconkiborgalexic:
kiborgalexic Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Awesome.Clap 
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:iconavefebris:
Avefebris Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2015  Student Digital Artist
jj abrams would be proud :lmao: nice piece :)
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:iconkatzun:
Katzun Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nice perspective and lighting as well as texture! Good job!
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:iconnidhogge:
Nidhogge Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Lovely painting, the colors are nice , I like the characters especially the one in the background :) well done !
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:iconapertureqiwi:
ApertureQiwi Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2015  Hobbyist Photographer
Stunning Picture :) Love her eyes *.* :)
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:iconxxkaori-neko-chanxx:
Xxkaori-neko-chanxX Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2015   Traditional Artist
Amazing work! I really the composition, although i think you have to work better with the background. But despite that nice job!!
Keep it up! :D
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:iconpleasedonttouchmyfry:
PleaseDontTouchMyFry Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2015  Student Artist
This is rather well made. I love how the demon/angel (???) looks.
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:iconrawglor:
Rawglor Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nice.
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:iconcasuss:
Casuss Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
 Nice one
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:iconasharashark:
asharashark Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nice perspective! I don't follow the show so I can't offer a proper critique on accuracy. I do like your commitment to lensflare though! The composition is pretty great, and I like the pose. Good work. 
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ot4ku99 Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2015
Awesome!
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:iconcanineprince:
CaninePrince Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2015   Digital Artist
The perspective is... somewhat bent. And the wings made the composition somewhat... difficult. There can be improvement, but it is quite well-made.
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Shadowheart626 Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2015  Student General Artist
The way the hair curves looks really nice. I wouldn't recommend leaving the background so blurry even though it's sorta an action piece. It just ruins all the good work you put into that background pretty much imo.

also I thiink her right foot may be missing.
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ZoevanRumt Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2015  Hobbyist Photographer
love the dark red in it!
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:iconkipip:
Kipip Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2015
This is great *-*
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:iconjotunmai:
Jotunmai Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
impressive wings!! *__*
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:iconplumporange:
PlumpOrange Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
The prespective is quite strange, and the background shading is flat. However, well done, keep up with practice)
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:iconutria:
utria Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
I like this scene...the illusion of movement and elasticity is great.
Congratulations for this excllent work. 
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:iconmust-dog:
must-dog Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2015
Cool character
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:iconorchidkitty:
orchidkitty Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
I like the composition and your coloring :)
Shadows are missing underneath her body and under every overlapping piece, like her armor.
The perspective itself is really cool.
Makes it really dynamic.
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:iconjotunmai:
Jotunmai Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Lovely! :iconmonkeyloveplz:
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:iconq99:
Q99 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2015
Very shiny, and I like the wings
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:iconelleon12:
Elleon12 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2015
Awesome perspective :)
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:iconmilly-alexander:
Milly-Alexander Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2015  Professional Traditional Artist
Really nice ! I love it ^^
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:iconconstancelea:
constancelea Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2015  Professional Traditional Artist
Haha great stuff. Gotta love that non-functional armor you always see in those video games. :faint:
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:iconvymnis:
Vymnis Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2015  Student Digital Artist
hey thanks im glad you liked the picture but i dont see whats wrong with the armor. mind expanding on that point? it seems perfectly functional to me. also its not from a video game.
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:iconlexakawaii:
LexaKawaii Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Heart Heart +fav +fav +fav +fav +fav 
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:iconday-devil:
Day-Devil Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
big swooping wings are always a good thing
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:iconteacher-tan:
Teacher-tan Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2015
It's so amazing!
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:iconvymnis:
Vymnis Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2015  Student Digital Artist
thank you ^^
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:iconteacher-tan:
Teacher-tan Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2015
No need to thank me!
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:iconmfmarlei:
mfMarLei Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2015
complete utter badassery right there
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:iconevilcrowbar:
evilcrowbar Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2015  Professional General Artist
nice work !
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:iconlambii:
Lambii Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2015
cool scenery and design^^
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