the lineart is kinda weird.the charater looks kinda frogetable.the color palette is nice.i suddgest you to use a sketch if you didnt use one.the character looks a little too young to be twenty-three.you didnt provide much details. theres barely any shading. the head looks weird. the lineart on the legs is thicker than the other leg. you didnt give the reason why there is meat on her shirt. you didnt give how she murdered people (since is a creepypasta original character).you didnt add her backstory,likes and dislikes, or even personality.i think you have a lot of room for improvement. good-bye.