Time to play (chapter 1)

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June 21, 2021
Time to play (chapter 1) by VivaAnimals2000
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"Happy birthday to you, happy birthday to you, happy birthday dear Lilly, happy birthday to you!"

11-year-old Lilly Laurenson sat up straight in bed when she heard this song outside her door.

It was no ordinary day today because Lilly turned 11 years old.

The door opened and her mother, father and her older sister Bertha Laurenson stepped in.

In her hand, her mother held a large chocolate cake and her father held two large packages.

Bertha was also holding a package and it could be seen that she had bought it at Toys R Us.

"Happy birthday darling!" said mother Harriet, kissing Lilly on her head.

Lilly smiled happily, she was so eager to eat her cake and to have her presents opened.

"Now you want to open your presents and eat some cake?" asked Lilly's father, who apparently could read her mind.

"Of course i want, give me them!" exclaimed Lilly.

Lilly snatched her mother's present and tore it up in less than two minutes.

In the package there was a board game, chess.

"Oh, thank you mom!" cheered Lilly.

"I thought you would be happy," said mother Harriet.

"Now it's Bertha's turn!" said her dad Jim.

"Okay," said big sister Bertha.

She handed over her package and Lilly quickly tore it open.

In Bertha's package it was, nothing.

Lilly looked angrily at her 16-year-old older sister.

"Hahaha! Pranked! you really thought there was something in there, ”laughed Bertha.

Jim and Harriet looked sternly at their daughter.

"That was not very nice of you Bertha!" said Jim sternly.

I agree!” Said Harriet.

"Come on, don't you have any sense of humor?" Bertha asked.

No one agreed with her.

"Well then, then it's my turn to give you my present, happy birthday my beloved daughter!" said Jim, handing over a large package, it was dusty and it looked like it was made of wood.

Lilly looked at the package.

"Where did you find this dad?" Lilly asked.

“I was visiting our local second hand shop, and there, I found it. I think you will be very happy ", said Jim.

Lilly tore open the packages, her eyes twinkled when she saw what the package contained.

The package included a large puppet doll, dummy doll and a porcelain doll.

The puppet with his red hair, the dummy doll with his black hair and red bow tie were boys, and the porcelain doll with her brown hair and her blue eyes was a girl.

Lilly jumped up from her bed and hugged her father.

“Oh, thank you very much dad! These three dolls will be perfect for my collection! ” exclaimed Lilly.

"What did I say? You would be happy, ”said Jim.

Lilly thought this was the best birthday ever, despite her big sister's mean joke.

"You three and I, we will be good friends, I'm sure," said Lilly, hugging the three vintage dolls.

She thought it almost felt like the dolls stroked her arm a little lightly, but that was just in her imagination.

Lilly quickly changed from pajamas to normal clothes, then she went down to the kitchen and ate waffles with maple syrup and butter on.

It was a glorious day in Lilly's hometown of Vancouver British Columbia today, the sun was shining and the air was warm and pleasant.

"So darling, how were you going to celebrate the rest of your birthday?" Harriet asked as she washed the dishes.

"My best friend Emma is coming over today soon, and we have planned to have a sleep over," Lilly replied.

"What time is she coming?"

"She should show up at any time."

"Anytime? But then you have to hurry to clean your room ", said mother Harriet".

"Yes, Mom," Lilly replied.

"And you have to change into normal pants and not pajamas pants," Harriet said.

"I did," Lilly replied.

"Take a look," Harriet said, pointing.

Very true, Lilly was still wearing her checkered pajama pants.

“Ooops! I'll go change immediately, ”Lilly said a little embarrassed.

She ran up to her room again.

Then she saw that her piece of cake, which she would have saved for later, was mashed on the floor, also, her pillow was completely torn and ripped apart, feathers were flying everywhere.

And in the middle of all the disaster, her porcelain doll Zoey was sitting.

"Strange, but I probably know all who may have done it!" muttered Lilly angrily, thinking of big sister Bertha.

Just then she heard a knock on her door.

“Lilly, you slimy little piss ant! Open the door!" yelled her big sister Bertha with in a very angry voice.

"Speaking of the devil", Lilly said and reluctantly opened the door.

When a 11 years old girl named Lilly receives three vintage dolls on her birthday, her and her family's lives spirals out of control, because
these three vintage dolls has a very evil intention.

I hope you like the first chapter of my ghost story!

(If you want to use this story in any way, you have to ask me for permission first, and don't forget to give me credit!)
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Really well made!

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Thank you very much!

Malintra-Shadowmoon's avatar

Congratulations on your well-deserved DD. :)

VivaAnimals2000's avatar

Awwwww, thank you, :) :huggle:

You are so kind!

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Very Nice work!!! :clap: Congrats on your DD!!!

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Thanks! I'm very happy that you liked it:D

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