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The John of Hammond

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By virenity   |   
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Published: June 7, 2008
There once was a solid defense
On an island with assloads of fence.
But before the destruction
Became a deduction
He still said they spared no expense.
© 2008 - 2020 virenity
JURASSIC PARK.

The way I wrote this is flawed, but I still kinda like it.
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latyleHobbyist Digital Artist
*Rofls*
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Let us split our sides togethar! *sha-keeeeeen*
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latyleHobbyist Digital Artist
Everytime I feel down I'm gonna look at this, it makes me laugh so hard.
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SwashyBuckles Traditional Artist
loved it. <3
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SwashyBuckles Traditional Artist
yes, but this is after i read it. and im telling you i loved it.


like, i loved reading it.


for sure i love it though.
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That is such an awesome comment. 8D
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lol, assloads of fence...
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MeixlyHobbyist Digital Artist
Well, since I've commented on all your other poems, I figure I'll steal first comment here too. XD
Your poems are in fact so fantastic that I shall now sing you a song!
:sing: *sings Akira Yamaoka music*
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O~O A-A-A-A-AKIRA YAMAOKA? I LOVE YOU THIS MUCH! *INVISIBLE MEASURING MOTION*
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MeixlyHobbyist Digital Artist
Well I love you this much!! --> :boogie:
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