Flight

Not generally a fan of rhyming, but here it is nice and unforced.  This piece is nice, hopeful yet also vulnerable.  Can be taken as a metaphor for so many things.  Risking, wanting to break out of our shell, personal growth, or even transcending a past pain.  Nice work.

I've come back to read this again, and again.

I enjoyed reading this piece. It felt fast and conveyed that alive feeling like that moment of preparation right before you do something crazy. It isn't crazy yet, but you know it's about to be.

I'm a believer in improving so I try to leave some light crit even if I'm passing through. Hope you don't mind!

Crit #1:  The only thing that didn't really fit is the "repressing the lies" portion. Maybe that's a personal thing, or has some alternate meaning, but I don't think it is clear to the average reader. 

Crit #2:  I don't really understand your capitalization and punctuation choices. If you have some solid reasoning behind them and it was a conscious decision, then feel free to ignore this. It "looks" like every line is capitalized because it's a new line and therefor needs a capital (etc). So I encourage you to really analyze these aspects and how to utilize them to emphasize, or at least not distract from, what you're presenting to the audience.

Loved it!

I actually just wrote a poem about flight!
This is way better than mine, though!

This is utterly wonderful... I think this is my favourite poem on here so far!