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spidey_gargoyles color
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Published: November 30, 2009
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and this color?!!! go for yours critiques!!
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Mich974's avatar
Mich974 Digital Artist
Eh! sa donne un coup de fouet tes dessins hyper dynamique franchement bravo..!
Tkbrain's avatar
his head is weird. Still, good work
BrandonNielsen87's avatar
This is definitely my favorite.
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gordeenhooowStudent Traditional Artist
Very nice. Love the lighting.
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cerebraleyeProfessional Traditional Artist
The colors are nice, I like how you have the gray buildings in the background. water effect is good but not enough to look wet though. The glossiness of the stone is almost there in the foreground. Griffin statue is very cool. The pose of spiderman is good. The head is way off! badly off and it stands out. the leg half hidden by the griffin is also way off and stands out. arms are too thin and the anatomy of the ribs are looking like a folded balloon. This is just learning anatomy and the figure in motion. there are plenty of books you can get on that. One I would suggest for anatomy though, that is great, is " an atlas of anatomy for artists" by Fritz Schider made by Dover publications, inc New York.
very good composition, buildings are great, and the atmosphere is set for the mood of oppressive times ahead.
Keep up the great work!
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Vinz-el-TabanasProfessional Digital Artist
Thanks to complete critique!! lool very thanks!
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deCharlesHobbyist Traditional Artist
fantastic job, colors, letters &drawing, spider-alien...
rebelshred's avatar
i love the colouring and the background and everything, except your spider man's head is shaped oddly. looks bulbous. just saying.
spidermanfan2099's avatar
Ah, really like this, lovely style in terms of proportions and general tone. Colouring fits well with the lineart too. As a colourist, I would make 2 amends to it, but they are very minor! I take the opportunity to use a photo BG also when it arrives... especially with a scene like this. The photo you chose is essentially perfect and the adjustments made for it are fine, but the angle is wrong and the consideration of the size of the building Spidey is on is lost with this BG... I feel a whole sky setting would actually be more placed, or you could just use a city upshot to line up with the lineart perpective. Like I said though, thats a minor niggle for me. Secondly, colourwise, I think the foreground buildings upper should be less saturated (maybe darker) to stop drawing my eye over to it... I wanna see the amazing Spidey, not the wall haha! The logo is cool, sits well with the BG colours, I know some people hate it, buts its always cool trying to emulate a cover.

Great piece, and I've only stumbled across this so far in your gallery and its well deserving of seeing more of your stuff so you get a 'watch' from me :D
JonHughes's avatar
I like your style and I think you did a good job on this. Normally it's not a good idea to add a photo background, but in this case it works. Actually the only thing that I don't like about it is the logo. Logos are generally only ever added to covers to identify the book. Art always looks better without them. Also, I'm not sure if coloring is a focus for you or not, but your coloring is very good. Great work :)
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SHAKALoneHobbyist General Artist
En effet, le bras gauche parait rachitique alors que la cuisse semble énorme, sans parler du crane (on sait que Parker est une tête! X3) mais je comprends tout à fait que ce soit ton style graphique et c' est justement ce qui apporte sa dynamique au dessin... et puis on sent bien dans l'assurance des traits que le crayonné est parfaitement maitrisé...
Pour ce qui est de la colorisation je trouve que la lumière bleue est un peu trop présente (ou j' ai du mal à comprendre d' où provient la lumière peut-être...)
Enfin voilà, c' est mon avis... ;3
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Vinz-el-TabanasProfessional Digital Artist
yes, c'est vrai, il y a quelques trucs qui ne vont pas!

on m'avait déjà fait la remarque de l'anat' de spidey et de la lumière... merci d'avoir prit de ton temps pour critiquer cette illus'!
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SHAKALoneHobbyist General Artist
De rien, deviant est fait pour ça! ;)
D' ailleurs si l' envie te prends de donner tes impressions sur ma dernière déviation, fais donc! Je serais ravie d' avoir un avis objectif pour une fois! XD
FalseFace13's avatar
I think it looks sick. I think if your gonna do a pre-existing character the right way to do it is to use your own style so you still get something interesting and totally unique.
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Vinz-el-TabanasProfessional Digital Artist
It's really for the long head but it's a style of my spidey, In any cases it is true!

Thancks for your critiques...
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dullpanicHobbyist Digital Artist
I'm no pro and my drawing skills are still novice, but his head looks way too long I know you were going for that foreshortening looking down look but it looks like an alien in spider garb.

Colors are amazing wish I could color like that.
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