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Quality not as good as i wanted because i had it on a low setting
All i wanted to do was convey the feeling of lonlyness and being trapped.

No Escape
Inside these angry walls,
I'm haunted by
your pierceing call.
I'm trapped
within a whirl of light,
there's no escape
until the night.
You drained my energy
you drained my tears
and now i'm left with
these thoughts and fears.
No Escape
from those words you said,
they still haunt me
everyday, inside my head.
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TheMadScientist's avatar
Very emotive picture. I can definitely relate to it. I love the shadow. The monochromic colour scheme. You can feel the pain. The hurt. The loneliness. The hopelessness. It's very powerful. Nicely done.
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you really did convey the feeling very well. it's an interesting photo.
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stetre76Hobbyist Photographer
Psycho is back - i guess Mr. Hitchcock would love this photo ;)
poughboy's avatar
very cool pic, and poim, but one usually has to be better then the other (a coint rarely lands on it's side lol) but i think there bothe verry espressive, i hope you were never in a relationship thatmade you feel like that
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ah yeh thats damn good!!!
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my first reaction on the image... felt really scared by i dont know what. just the power of imagery i guess. but then the poem and the description. damned u r gud at this stuff. i love the poem. i wish i cud feel the world like u do. probably u'd want to check out what i wrote. its a short story. [link]

>>there's no escape until the night

>>you are stil trapped for as long as it takes to forget things

cant i +fav just the description ;) i'd wanna take it home with me
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thats so great and thanks so much for everything :)
this means alot!
optimist's avatar
you could try neat image on it, i think it would add much to the ghost-feeling :)
its cool that the arms are so surrealistic long, and the hands deep black on the white "prison"
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Thanks for your comment :hug:
whats neat ps? where abouts is it?
optimist's avatar
neat image is a lil proggy, you use to remove iso noise from the photo - [link]
its really good :)
have phun :D
twinkles1955's avatar
Well I think it kind of adds to the photo that it isn't high quality, kind of makes it feel more mysterious. I like the concept very much and you produced it well.
fakk's avatar
Great idea! Really a great shot!
And very exhaustive description! :)
HappyKat's avatar
Wow. This is one of those "butterflies in stomach" pieces for me. They don't come along very often, you've created something very special here. It's amazing. The comment and the poem manage to make it even more eerie and yet beautiful. Congratulations. *favourite*
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thanks for the :+fav: !!!
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My pleasure. :hug: Keep it up!
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HellaciousGraceStudent Writer
very cool. i like it, i might be better not as sharp. makes a little darker, a little more hazy. i dunno, anyway. you really get the feeling of no escape, a claustrophobic atmosphere if you will. anyway... good job.
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Thankyou!! thats wonderful you think that :D
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wicked! its like the video of: Korn - Thoughtless if youve ever seen it. Very good :)
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nope ive never seen it, i only have these crap pop music channels which suck :(
thanks so much! thanks for the watch and everything!! <3
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Very cool picture. How did you take that? The shower?

Never the less, its a very effective picture, and looks very good :)
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