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Oh Candy Darling

Oh Candy Darling....

All makeup/hair/styling Via Marie

Model Lou
Image details
Image size
614x796px 246.69 KB
Shutter Speed
1/60 second
Focal Length
50 mm
ISO Speed
Date Taken
Jul 18, 2012, 6:25:31 PM
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knowledge222's avatar
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

Focal point of model in center could be little softer skin looks little dry compared to the blend in softness around... shadows on face seem a little dark takes away from models face a bit... timelessness of emotion could be a little stronger... all around still I give a four out five stars for how it looks outfit scene and emotional presence is still there models form is nice as well

I am not a professional artist or critique at all... it asked for my honest critique so that's what I see and felt... I hope I didn't offend you still a very nice picture regardless keep it up.
viamarie's avatar
I think its fair... the larger pic shows more of the detail in the highlights as well as the shadows really but because of the size, it gets lost. I shot this to be enlarged for a gallery showing. I wish I can show it here larger but this is just a peak of a series I'm presenting in Paris this fall.
knowledge222's avatar
AHH I fully understand... it is a very nice picture and the larger image will definitely show those details in the highlights and I wish you could too but for now best of wishes in presenting this in Paris and good luck.
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JALpix's avatar
Great portrait! It has such a great 60's retro feel to it!
Schieben's avatar
Love the tights. :D
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