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Fighting Spinix by Vex2001
[x] - Is your character a Rayian? (Yes, of course. You're seeing picture, no?!)

[ ] - Is your character a hybrid? (For example: Rayman/cat or dog mix)

[ ] - Is your character a mix of 3 or more species?

[/] - Is your character really thin? (torso thinner than the head) (He is thin like girl.)

[ ] - Does your character sport a large chest?

[ ] - Was your character made by Betilla?

[ ] - Was your character made by Mr. Dark?

[ ] - Was your character created by Polokus?

[ ] - Is your character related to Rayman or Raymesis in any way?

[x] - Is your character friends with all of the people in the Rayman Universe? (Almost all.)

[ ] - Is your character hated by all the people in the Rayman Universe?

[/] - Is your character really powerful? (Aka, could they beat Rayman or anyone in the Glade in a fight?) (Yes, he is powerful like Super Sonic and he can beat also Bill Cipher.)

[ ] - Is your character an angel, God/Goddess, or some supernatural being?

[ ] - Is your character able to create beings like Betilla, Mr. Dark and Polokus?

[ ] - Is your character in a romantic relationship with Rayman/Raymesis?

[ ] - Do Rayman/Raymesis get lovesick over said OC?

[ ] - Does your OC have children with Rayman/Raymesis?

[x] - Is your character an adventurer? (Yes, He is!)

[ ] - Is your character royalty?

[ ] - Was your character royalty at some point?

[ ] - Does your character have “Ray” in the name?

[ ] - Has one or more of their parents died?

[ ] - Is your character considered to be a rare species?

[x] - Is any part of them considered to be rare? (this includes hair/fur color, heterochromia, wings, clothing, powers, weapons, and etc) (Yes, Blushine Pearl and Tattos.)

[ ] - Are they considered to be the “chosen one” along side Rayman?

[/] - Is your character always happy almost all of the time? (One day, he had heart and he was crying that he doesn't have friends.)

[/] - Are they considered to be wise? (unless they’re fairly old, you shouldn’t be checking this one :)) (He is a bit wise.)

[ ] - Do they control a certain element? (If you mean some powerful item so yes, his Blueshine Pearl.)

[ ] - Has your character killed someone?

[ ] - Is your character evil?

[ ] - Is your character part demon?

[ ] - Does your character have a hoodie like Rayman’s?

[ ] - Does your character have hair like Rayman’s? (unless they are related, they shouldn’t have hair like his)

[x] - Does your character know the majority or all of the people in the Rayman world? (Yes, He knows.)

[ ] - Is your character weak only until they get angry? (Nope!)

[ ] - Is your character always mean or angry? 

[ ] - Is your character considered to be “highly important” to the people of the Rayman world?

[/] - Does your character not have any weaknesses? (He has some weaknesses,but I don't know what weaknesses.^^;)

[ ] - Does your character have a really obscure name? (Only check this if there is no reason behind the foreign name)

[x] - Does your character use Light Magic? (Yes, He uses.)

[/] - Does your character use Dark Magic? (Sometimes, He uses them.^^;)

[x] - Does your character have special tattoos? (ones that aren’t just regular tattoos for show) (Spirals?)

[ ] - Does your character have a tragic backstory?

[/] - Does your character sing? (You would not believe how many singer OCs are actually in this fandom) (Yes, He is singing a bit.^^)

[/] - Does your character sleep with two or more characters? (Sometimes.)

[x] - Has your character befriended a villain even though your character is a good guy? (Yes, He is friend with Rabbids.:D)

[/] - Do they have any flaws? (Maybe?)

[ ] - Has your character ever been petty, selfish, lazy, or pointlessly cruel for no other purpose than that it was convenient for him/her, even though they are supposed to be a good guy?

[/] - Does your character win all the fights they get into? (Almost all.)

[ ] -  Does this character look much younger than he actually is? (For example, he might be a 300-year-old that looks 20)

[ ] - Does your character have a “long lost relative”?

[/] - Does your character have problems with authority figures? (For example: their parents, bosses, police, royalty or any other higher ups) (Yes?)

[x] - Does this character speak more than 3 languages? (Yes, He can speak Czech, Slovak, Polish, Russian and English.)

[/] - Is your character notably good looking to most people? (Idk. Maybe, yes. Tell me if you're thinking that he looks good.^^)

[ ] - Is this character ever raped or tortured? 

[/] - Does the character make any moral decisions that people will probably disagree with? (Idk.)

[/] - Does this character consider his talents and/or abilities a curse? (I don't understand you a bit.)

[/] - Can this character polymorph or otherwise change species? (Idk,but maybe, yes.^^)

[ ] - Is this character the last survivor of anything? (Common examples include a species, family, town or civilization) 

[ ] - Are they from a completely different fandom, but live in the Rayman fandom?

Score: 16,5

There’s 60 questions. Point is, if a lot of these questions (or even just 20 of them can be enough to make it a sue) have been checked off and don’t have a proper explanation, your character needs all the work it can get.

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ClaireAimee Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2017  Student Traditional Artist
I had no idea Rayman had so many terrible OC's. Until I did some more research...and the suffering began...
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CharmmyColour Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
All fandoms need one like this! Seriously, really good test.

Your character it's a little Mary Sue, but he can get better with some work. Actually, I was in the exact same stop a while ago with a character of mine. It was hard to fix her, but also a lot of fun!
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Dumuzink Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2016
If he has flaws he isn't a Mary Sue, as Mary Sues are suppoused to be perfect flawless characters pretty much.
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g-urfa Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist

[ nah, theres other versions of mary sues

the 'i do everything wron : (((( ' mary sue
the 'im a meme w/ no personality ' mary sue
our normal mary sue

and...

' im so weak.... /beats up bill cipher./]
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Dumuzink Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2016
Actually the definition of a Mary Sue is what I stated above, of course nowdays is used as a insult towards any character immature hatebrats use towards any character they hate, which gets very annoying to say the least.. 

Having bad luck doesn't make someone a Mary Sue, real people have problems like that.. 

Some people don't know their own strength tbh.. :/
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g-urfa Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist

i said 'other versions' not 'YOURS IS WRONG@@@@'

nah, theres a diffrence between bad luck and knocking over every single thing and being all 'desu....sorry >/////<  /breaks vase for the 50th time/ '

overkill, man.

yeah 
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Dumuzink Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2016
I was saying what the origin of the term meant, people use it for other things. I don't think anyone says 'desu' like that though..I spill my coffee a lot tbh though.. You'd be suprised but some people can be very clumsier then people think. ^^; Not accused you of the above though, no offense, but don't jump to conclusions. The misuse of Mary Sue being used for things it isn't gets annoying though. 
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Skyfallheart12 Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2016  Professional General Artist
Is he a mary sue or not?
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Vex2001 Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
No.:D
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Skyfallheart12 Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2016  Professional General Artist
Good :3
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