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FUTURA Multipurpose web template - For Sale

"FUTURA" Multipurpose web template - 26.11.2013

A web template i found really appealing to add on deviantart, hope you will love it guy's.
Don't forget to comment and watch me, for future deviations. :-)

P.S I would really respect some critic !

Design status: Available for sale
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DreamON-Mpak's avatar
:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

The main function of a company website is its usability and accessible navigation. Users are like little children - metaphorically should always keep them in hand and guide them. This is the main error that I see in your design - too many navigation elements that confuse the average consumer, disordered arrangement and lack of personal style. Nowadays it is a modern clean design but it is not forgiveness for lack of personal input element in the works.
My advice is :
Do not combine too many background elements in one page. ( in this templete I see 4)
Remove repeated elements from the content. ( elements like "about us" and all "blog" content)
Less navigational elements ! ( This design is cluttered with buttons)
Always express your personal style in your work. This makes it distinctive and memorable. ( This design carries associations of a hospital or a business card to a dermatologist - Clean, sharp and without feeling and idea )
Never try to fulfill the wishes of the client - If you make a design with a sense customers will be pleased with what you've done.
vertus-design's avatar
Hi, DreamON-Mpak !
Thank you very much for your detailed, and well written critique, and the time it took you to do it, really !
But when i started to read it, there were some points, where i didn't see things in my work, that apparently you saw...

I agree with you with this "The main function of a company website is its usability and accessible navigation. Users are like little children - metaphorically should always keep them in hand and guide them."

You mentioned that i'am having too much navigation items in my design, to which i must disagree.
Web-page sections must always be accessible in instant, that's one of the reasons i put navigation items, till it still is appealing for an average user.

Could you please explain me by what u meant disordered arrangement ?

I didn't try to combine too much of backgrounds elements, it's more of my personal style why i put each section in different color background.

Yeah with repeated elements, i must agree, i could probably put there something else, but it was for preview use more like, that's why I didn't pay too much attention to that, tough.

I don't know how you see in this design, "hospital or business card design to dermatologist" style, because, i quite always strive for unique and dynamic design, that's being driven by my views and imagination. And i try no to copy anyone, or try to come close to anyone.

This design was pretty much influenced to me, by 00's urban city's architecture.
And Helsinki metro stations.
Grafikhahn's avatar
Nice template and great matching colors!
vertus-design's avatar
Grafikhahn's avatar
You are welcome!
onejian's avatar
Good job,well done~
DhuWorldArt's avatar
Great work! Colors are amazing. Keep it up!
dudeksmartins's avatar
Normāli,bet kautkas ir par daudz!
vertus-design's avatar
Grūti pateikt vai par daudz, bet kaut ko jau var palabot, varbūt tuvākajās dienās augšuplādēšu nedaudz palabotu versiju.
AzRaIL922's avatar
Hey, really nice Design! Wanted to tell you I made a Design too, inspired by yours. 
You can find it in my gallery.
Keep up the good work :)
vertus-design's avatar
Thank's !
Just checked, great work, keep it up !
Don't forget to follow me for more inspiration ! :-)
RealVect0r's avatar
round corners around "Our clients" are unexpected =)
vertus-design's avatar
I guess in a good way ? :)
RealVect0r's avatar
hmmm... ummm... aaaa... not sure about that...
vertus-design's avatar
Okay, i see what you mean, did some edit. :)
RealVect0r's avatar
Oh, that's perfect 4 me now. Nod 
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