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Page 5 of the script

5.0


5.1Dream: Tranh is hunched over a desk in cramped office. A tower of folders and files teeters towards him.

5.2 It pushes him through a tall glass window.
SFXSPSSSSSSSSSSH

5.3 Beneath him, several stories of air separate him from pavement swarming with cars and pedestrians.

5.4 He remains suspended in a cloud of paper and glass.
SFXKchK

5.5 He's awake in the living room. Le is looking down at him, carrying her briefcase and her blazer over her arm.
Le: She's napping again?

5.6 Tranh is looking around the room perplexed. Le has walked over to close the sliding door.
Tranh: What? No, she's-

5.7 She's dropped her things as she looks out at the backyard.
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Page 4 of the script

4.0


4.1Minh runs over to the ladder. The worm lands in the pool, adandoned.
SFXspsh
SFXfffffsh

4.2 She grabs hold of the ladder.
SFXfffffshh

4.3 But a breeze has carried the ball slightly out of her reach.
SFXfffffsh

4.4 She steps into the pool, down onto the first step of the ladder.

4.5 She leans out after the ball.
SFXfffffsh

4.6 Her reflection in the water: she has lost her grip on the ladder and is pushing the ball away from her with the tips of her fingers.
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Page 3 of the script

3.0


3.1The ball drifts away, toward the opposite side of the pool.
SFXshhhhhk

3.2 Minh strains to hit it with the end of the worm.

3.3 She runs to the end of the pool, dripping water behind her as she goes.

3.4 She's squatting at the end of the pool, again trying to nudge the ball to the edge of the pool. The ball is just beyond her reach.
SFXshhhhhk

3.5 The ball bumps into the ladder leading into the pool.
SFXpip
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Page two of the script

2.0


2.1 Minh negotiates her way down the two wooden steps leading down to the grass of the backyard.

2.2 The backyard is ringed by a tall wooden fence. A cedar elm grows at the end. A border of grass surrounds a crystal clear swimming pool, with a beach ball floating out in the center. Pool worms sit on a deck chair and a skimmer is propped up against the fence.

2.3 Minh is pulling a worm off of the chair.

2.4 She runs around the edge of the pool. The top of the worm is bending back behind her.

2.5 She squats by the edge of the pool, skimming the surface of the water as she tries to get the ball over to where she can get it.
SFXshhhhhk

2.6 Drops of water from the worm create ripples on the surface.

SFXtk tk tk tk tk
Deliquesce Page 2
Here is page one of the script for anyone interested. 


1.0


1.1 Early afternoon in the summer. Ice cubes float in a heavily sweating glass of coke.
[Deliquesce]
SFX: tnk


1.2 Tranh has fallen asleep on a white couch in the living room. The book he was reading sits cover-up in his lap. He's still wearing his wide-rimmed glasses.
TV: [OP] Can you find the ah?
I can! It's in the ah-ah-apple!

1.3 A few toys are strewn in on the rug in front of the TV. It's been left on an brightly-colored children's show. 
TV: Oh, I can. It's in the ah-ah-astronaut!

1.4 The coffee table has a plate of bananas chunks, some of which have been mashed rather than eaten. A large bowl of che sits on the table. Stray finger streaks suggest it has been sampled by someone who has yet to master the spoon. 
TV: [OP] And can. It's in the ah-ah-ananconda! 
Ahhhhhh!

1.5 Similar streaks on the open sliding-glass door tells us this person has left to explore the backyard.
TV: [OP] Ha ha ha ha ha

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