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Star Bolt

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Published: December 11, 2012
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Me in pony form.

Bio:

Name: Star Bolt

Sex: Male

Species: Pegasus

Cutie Mark: Three Stars

Relatives: Scootaloo *little sister*

Star Bolt is a Pegasus with many different talents, he has been
known for his amazing singing voice and being the newest member
of the Wonderbolts . He moved to Cloudsdale by himself and found
Scootaloo, his little sister he had never met before. Also having a crush
on Princess Luna, Star Bolt tries to keep his emotions hidden. But he may
seem tough, but he's just a real softy.
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unoriginal and bullshit
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DarkHeartLycanHobbyist Traditional Artist
>MarySue
>Bland af
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tibolekaHobbyist Digital Artist
Mary Sue much? I myself came up with a whole convoluted backstory for my own OC, but it's not Mary Sue. This OC had potential, but it's just another bottom-of-the-barrel OCs. ugh.
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... My god, is he serious?
Bland color scheme, with enough mary traits to make Ebony from My Immortal seem normal in comparison, with a downright laughable backstory. Your average piece of shit in the cesspool known as deviantART. Story: Oh, wow. I'm impressed! I didn't think i could a character that's more of a bland mary sue than Sonichu! -6/10. Color scheme:Meh/10. Bland color scheme. Design: Pony maker. No score.
Final score:-3/10. This is one of the saddest OCs i've ever seen. This poor, poor idea! It had so much potential!
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pnutbutter92Hobbyist General Artist
>inb4 marysue
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MoonlightTheifHobbyist Traditional Artist
Star Bolt! Why do you have to live so far? From Manehattan!
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I can take a train someday
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MoonlightTheifHobbyist Traditional Artist
Okay Then ^_^ Visit me someday
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Sure thing
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Star: Feels good to be back
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Star: Well then, have you seen my little sister at all?
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Geo: *Thinks* Hmm. I don't know
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???: STAR YOU'RE HERE!!

Star: Hey there she is!

*Scootaloo appears and hugs Star*
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Geo: :? Wait. Star. Scootaloo is your sister? Wow. I'm not surprised.
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Star: I've never met her, but I'm happy I did!

Scootaloo: *giggle*

Star: Still no cutie mark huh?

Scootaloo: No, and I've been teased for it.

Star: What?! Who has been picking on you?
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Nice, I have used it and gotten some boss ones.
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