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VORTEX OC Redesign by VAXION VORTEX OC Redesign by VAXION
This is another redesign of one of my characters from my VEXIMA project. The one on the left is my old version and the one on the right the new one.
I originally named him "Hitman" but now I'm calling him VORTEX.
So.... what ya think? Did I improve on it or not? I'm redesigning my whole roster of characters and adding some new ones so expect more of these in the near future.
I'll really appreciate your feedback on these redesigns I'm working on, Thanks so much in advance! w00t! 

EDIT: Following advice from people who suggested he (new design) should have some blue on the legs as well, I added a few parts. Thanks for the feedback! 
EDIT 2: Did a whole new illust of the new version with all the final elements to his design and new background as well to make for a better comparison to the old one! Hope you like! :D (Big Grin) 
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:iconmortalshinobi:
mortalshinobi Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2018
nice update. somehow... he reminds me of glacius. good work on him
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VAXION Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks! Yeah, the ice guy from KI.... now that you mention it, I can see a certain resemblance! Nod 
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:iconmortalshinobi:
mortalshinobi Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2018
welcome. and yeah, a bit of  a resemblance to him
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JericaWinters Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Great design. I love the turquoise. ^_^
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VAXION Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much! I did play a bit with the tone until I finally decided on that one, so glad you like it too! :D 
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MercyInk87 Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2018
I'd keep the redesign, but with some of the blue accents on the legs in the style of the original.
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VAXION Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah, I see a lot of potential on the legs for some more blue areas but I thought on keeping him simpler and away from looking like some kind of Iron Man spin-off, I'm a bit afraid that more blue/armor might have that effect! Wink/Razz  hehe Also, he's got a sister who will also be sporting a very similar suit, just different color and I think I'll play a bit more with her design so I might add to that one the color accents on the legs.
I really appreciate your feedback and will take into consideration every opinion I get on my OCs! :D (Big Grin) 
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MercyInk87 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2018
Maybe just color the knee pads and toe protection. Keep up the good design work, dude.
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VAXION Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
I added a few blue accents on the legs as suggested, I still wanted to keep it minimal but I think it's good addition. What you think? :)
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MercyInk87 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2018
Looks good. I actually like that the knees weren’t highlighted. Nice touches.
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VAXION Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah, I'll give that a try see how it looks! Thanks man! I'l soon post his female counterpart! :)
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mortalshinobi Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2018
nice design
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VAXION Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks my friend! Do you see improvement? 
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mortalshinobi Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2018
yep. some progression here over earlier pieces. ^^
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VAXION Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks, I know you're familiar with some of my early designs so I appreciate your opinion! :D
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mortalshinobi Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2018
no probs
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