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[TALOYQ Side Art] Another Unrequited Love

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*This side art is a part of series The Adventure Log Of Young Queen vavacung.deviantart.com/galler…

*Scootaloo in this story is the same Scootaloo from this PMV of mine www.youtube.com/watch?v=deYNvs…

"Ever since Spike had grown up into a mature age, both mentally and physically, he finally had the courage to confess his love to mare representing generosity…But she didn't return those same feelings to him, not even giving him a chance to prove himself…He became very depressed after that, but managed to move on like a proper adult. And after looking passed the mare of his first crush, he could finally see the world more clearly and had finally noticed that there have been other mares who were interested in him. But never did he know until now, when he no longer had his eyes only on the white unicorn.

Learning from the past made him realise what it felt like not getting the chance to prove his love. He gave all mares (except Twilight) a chance to try dating with him and see if they were good to be together or not. Most mares were only interested in his body and got rejected not long after, but there was still others who were more interested for who he was inside. Scootaloo was one of those mares.

Those two used to date before, and Spike had helped Scootaloo to set up a Repair Shop inside the old Cutie Mark Crusader clubhouse, once she deemed herself old enough to leave the Orphanage and live on her own. After he saw her as a grownup that was mature enough to take care of herself, they never even broke up. Yet Spike’s heart was smitten by another mare, and he chose to marry Applejack, the last mare he promised to date with.

As for Scootaloo, he just didn't choose her…And he never even told her why. Never told her what she was lacking, what she did wrong…She just didn't end up being the chosen one. So their relationship remains cloudy to this day, is she either a friend or a lover? She didn’t know, for it was something so close to romance, but yet never seemed so far from it...

Be it's didn't matter to her anymore. She don't mind to be just friend with Spike. Manage to end the Unrequited Love conflict on her own. She believe that someday the orphan mare like her will found a good stallion, as good as Spike to settle down. To having a warm family and child with him. And she will never let her child become an orphan like her.”

All clue about Spike used to date some other mares before :
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1 Naughty Continue with short story (Naughty Long 230X [1600 words]) can be found early on Patreon www.patreon.com/vavacung
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Unrequited love is love that is not returned. When you are a victim of unrequited love, it can be a very painful experience. Means two people cannot be together and they will be just friends, friends of friendship, right? it's all and they never see each other again and because they're just friends, right?

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templar127's avatar
Scootacute and Spike adorbs! X3
RMZERO's avatar
Beauty Scootaloo.
badrang22's avatar
what a cute Scootaloo!!! :D 
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So Rarity flat out told spike no without giving him a chance, and he eventually decided "Welp might as well do the adult thing and move on" then proceeded to give every mare but Twilight a chance just because he see's her as a sister expecting her just to move on... WELL GEE FUCKING WIZ SPIKE! I HONESTLY HAVE NO CELESTIA DAMNED CLUE WHY SHE WOULD OBJECT AT YOURS AND APPLEJACKS WEDDING!

You basically did what Rarity fucking did with a flimsy reason as to why while giving everyone else and their grandmother a chance and expecting Twilight being able to just go "Meh, there are others". Ponyville is predominately mares. Of course it would mean you have all the options you could choose from. But guess what Spike? There aren't that many stallions for Twilight to freakin choose from. And even moreso, I bet there are plenty who ONLY want to be with her because she is a Princess. She likely feels you are one of the ONLY males she can trust for that NOT to be the reason for being with her. One or two dates is all it would have taken to give her a chance and then say no.
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I kinda doubt that Twilight are want Spike as her partner. She basically raised him (with some Celestia help) and most likely in a sort of way see him as brother/son and not as a prospective marriage/romance/sexual partner.
OminousEdge's avatar
Nope. in one of the Previous Updates of A Young Queen it was said that Twilight was in love with Spike while he was the one that saw her as a sibling.
Comnislasher's avatar
Okay, that just... wrong. It's just one step short of incest. Yeah, they not biologically related but it's like parent make a move on his or her adopted child.
...but not like I'm greatly surprised. LOTS of vavakung ships don't make any sense for me.
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Just because you love someone with all of your heart. It didn't mean they will love you back. He kinda act as the active actor taking turn with the passive actor here. He finally understand what it feel like to be in love by those who you don't love back. Understand the feeling of Rarity herself.

Just like a song in my country

When he love one woman , she doesn't love him.
When another one cares for him , he still don't like her neither.
While another girl devotes love for him, he don't really want to accept.
Love is strange because the good match doesn't occur in the same time.
This story is in this way.

Love is like my telling , it doesn't match in the right time.
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Love the pic, love the PMV and have subscribed for more. :D (Big Grin) 
DragonKingAlpha's avatar
This is awesome! 
PLsboss1's avatar
All of those Imgur sites, lol dating the CMC, damn spike.
Zeropony55's avatar
I forgot we played as spike before.

Also I always see the nsfw one before I see normal >.>
Drakenhof's avatar
That young adult Scootaloo is cute
Setakarn's avatar
If Scootaloo cant fly, then she'll help others fly!
tigreanpony's avatar
Very cool, you have some wonderful mechanics going here for your story, very nicely done.
Guadisaves02's avatar
How old is Scootaloo here?
vavacung's avatar
Seeing that even Spike is teenage here. It's mean she being the same.
CrazyBrothersStyleR2's avatar
you know what is  Unrequited love?
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