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Crazy Future Part 81

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"You have something missing...." - Alternate Dawn

Shipping and Descendant Warning :
Spike X Rarity(Nightmare pony) = Sparity(Daughter)
Pinkie Pie X ??? = Super Surprise(Descendant)
(Spifire X Soarin) X (Daring Do X Ahuizotl) = Aerial Ace(Descendant)
Big Macintosh X Fluttershy = Apple Eden (Descendant)
Twilight Sparkle X -- Top Secret -- = Alternate Dawn(Son)
Applejack X ??? = Little AJ (Daughter)

Alternate Dawn Card Collection => vavacung.deviantart.com/galler…

Warning : This story takes place 100 years after Rarity dead. This story base on season 4. So anything that happened in season 5 will have nothing to do with this story.

Warning : This story's an alternate universe and is really crazy at times. Futa-spell or the magic that can make female pony impregnate another female pony doesn't exist.

Warning : a lot of 4th wall breaking and referencing. Sharing universe with "To Love God - To Love Mortal" but in the future and more crazy(and the crazy will be double by now). *You don't need to read "To Love God - To Love Mortal" to understand this story. It's just have many Easter egg for that story here.*

If you confused about chronology of this story, You can watch this timeline to help you => vavacung.deviantart.com/art/Cr…

English Editor : dracoblair.deviantart.com/

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ShadowSwirl's avatar
Wait0wat's avatar
"Incomplete" Geez, you make her sound like a lab experiment
77madman's avatar
It's like Im working a comic version of a JRPG
77madman's avatar
Playing! the word is playing, you handsome bastard
Well that's a rude thing to say.
Konrax's avatar
I'm not getting it, how does he she have hands? the questions keep piling up.
Gamerkm95's avatar
Little AJ is now going to steal the rest of the armor.....right?
MoonStarEeveeBlue's avatar
Why is something telling me that Alter is about to get hit by Little AJ?hmm 
Sturmlion1's avatar
She has hands, I sense a hidden Lyra experiment in the past!
ChaoticNote's avatar
Her "in-completion" is most likely related to the fact that she required Aerial Ace's help to defeat that dragon.
Phaedrolous's avatar
All the game references here...
Maybe the title should be changed along those lines.
anideterm3's avatar
OR maybe she also needs love to make her complete; that she hasn't had time for I guess from focusing on fighting, getting stronger, and looking for who killed her dad. At the very least she has friendship or some of it.
anideterm3's avatar
Heres my prediction of what comes next Little AJ will ask and demand what that something is and this time I think Dawn will refuse to tell her because what she is missing must be found out on her own and not just given the answer or it wouldn't be good. 
Marauder92's avatar
Uh, this is turning interesting...
DevilDan83's avatar
I wonder why she is AJ's daughter when others seem to be grand-kids of canon characters.
tyruvelp's avatar
aj went missing - possible time warp portal thingy to human world? too many references in this story to make sense any more 
R-Doll's avatar
Those gauntlets are impressive. I feel like I've seen them before, in some other piece of fiction.  
What does Alternate Dawn mean by "incomplete"?
A pony with hands. I wonder how she's adjusted herself between hands and hooves. Surely it is not easy.

Will Sunset Shimmer be included in this comic? She is rather amazing, in my opinion. It would be nice if she was a part of the story.  
Wonder when the other characters will interact with each other? I hope that the story will shift to the Sparity family. It would be cool to see Rarity's boutique in this "Crazy Future". That, along with Sweetie Belle's descendant. 

You're doing amazing work, vavacung.
whychong's avatar
Pick up sth with hoove instead of hand XD
CrimsonFangX666's avatar
I'm in agreement with Matanui. I'd like to know who LJ's dad is. O.O Ahuizotl?
SeaSwirl2001's avatar
(Spifire X Soarin) X (Daring Do X AHUIZOTL) = Aerial Ace(Descendant)
CrimsonFangX666's avatar
Oh, that's right... I forgot... hm... Not a diamond dog... hmmm.. dunno.
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