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Crazy Future Part 65

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"The world where Element of Harmony isn't one-hit kill weapon anymore..."

Ps. "Loyalty" isn't mistake word.

Shipping and Descendant Warning :
Spike X Rarity(Nightmare pony) = Sparity(Daughter)
Pinkie Pie X ??? = Super Surprise(Descendant)
(Spifire X Soarin) X (Daring Do X Ahuizotl) = Aerial Ace(Descendant)
Big Macintosh X Fluttershy = Apple Eden (Descendant)
Twilight Sparkle X -- Top Secret -- = Alternate Dawn(Son)
Applejack X ??? = ??? (Daughter)

Alternate Dawn Card Collection => vavacung.deviantart.com/galler…

Warning : This story takes place 100 years after Rarity dead. This story base on season 4. So anything that happened in season 5 will have nothing to do with this story.

Warning : This story's an alternate universe and is really crazy at times. Futa-spell or the magic that can make female pony impregnate another female pony doesn't exist.

Warning : a lot of 4th wall breaking and referencing. Sharing universe with "To Love God - To Love Mortal" but in the future and more crazy(and the crazy will be double by now). *You don't need to read "To Love God - To Love Mortal" to understand this story. It's just have many Easter egg for that story here.*

If you confused about chronology of this story, You can watch this timeline to help you => vavacung.deviantart.com/art/Cr…

English Editor : dracoblair.deviantart.com/

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spamer921's avatar
wait why little aj doesn't have hand here??
DragonKingAlpha's avatar
Me game knowledge! 
zombiepony100's avatar
must learn game knowledge
Let get this down

applejack Jr. Inherited rainbow's element of loyalty (not her decendant honesty)
Alter inherited his mothers magic
Areal ace inhereted Rairity's generosity.

super surprise likely inherited her decendant's element of laughter but this one is unconfirmed.
Dawnfur8888's avatar
Wingweaver7's avatar
It's confusing when the 'Element of Loyalty' is the shape of an apple...
Think it based on its owner cutie mark
77madman's avatar
So is this a video game or a comic because I so so confused
HP=Harmony Points, cute.
chiny117's avatar
i think its fluttershy cuz of the front of her hair and her shyness and AJ's cuz freckles ,strength and a apple mark 
japanrewind's avatar
kill la killl !? omg 
TwinBird's avatar
Is that the element of loyalty or honesty?
vavacung's avatar
It's Loyalty. Little AJ have apple cutie mark. But she is Loyalty. shape of Element change follow the bearer. That why it's apple.
TwinBird's avatar
Makes sense to me.
Lanthezombie's avatar
o u o someones gonna make a game about this....
izzyo816's avatar
yas!Clapping Pony Icon - Complete Mane Six Clap  i would buy that!
Actually...I think it may very well be a mistake.

The Tree of Harmony's gems are still shaped like the old Mane Six's Cutie Marks, remember?
And considering how the Tree of Harmony is most likely a sentient entity...it is obviously VERY DISTRAUGHT about the loss of all but 2 of the original Element Bearers.
vavacung's avatar
This is a lite version of Element that was made by Alternate Dawn. All of true element still place on Tree Of Harmony. It was made to borrow power of harmony to new bearer without taking true element out from Tree Of Harmony.
I know that...
...but still, I really like the concept of the "new bearers" being FAKE bearers.
So even though LJ, Aerial Ace, and Alternate Dawn are doing a good job of protecting Equestria here...the Tree of Harmony actually does not desire any new bearers whatsoever.
(I assume it's gems didn't change shape when the new/"fake" bearers were found?)

You did mention that Twilight and (Nightmare) Rarity still have the Rainbow Power...so would the reincarnations of Rainbow Dash and Pinkie Pie have it as well?
(I didn't list Applejack and Fluttershy because Applejack's clearly in the human world, and it's pretty obvious that Fluttershy now has eternal youth and eternal life(either a gift from Discord or an unintentional side-effect of the "Flutterbat Incident").)

(Sorry.  It's just that I'm probably the only one who gets what the writers were trying to tell us about the Elements; that is, anypony who can use the gems is an Element.)
Zalay02's avatar
This is amazing! I love the idea of Elemnt neclaces
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Roxas-D-N-A's avatar
Wait sec did Alter had a Element necklace too
Because he had a star necklace.
Fantasygerard2000's avatar
Will you send me the link? O^O
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