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Crazy Future Part 61

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"For you...For my card...For your last kiss. I Pinkie Promise that from now I will never kiss anyone without permission again."

Shipping and Descendant Warning :
Spike X Rarity(Nightmare pony) = Sparity(Daughter)
Pinkie Pie X ??? = Super Surprise(Descendant)
(Spifire X Soarin) X (Daring Do X Ahuizotl) = Aerial Ace(Descendant)
Big Macintosh X Fluttershy = Apple Eden (Descendant)
Twilight Sparkle X -- Top Secret -- = Alternate Dawn(Son) : "I'm so sick to be hated now"

Alternate Dawn Card Collection => vavacung.deviantart.com/galler…

Warning : This story takes place 100 years after Rarity dead. This story base on season 4. So anything that happened in season 5 will have nothing to do with this story.

Warning : This story's an alternate universe and is really crazy at times. Futa-spell or the magic that can make female pony impregnate another female pony doesn't exist.

Warning : a lot of 4th wall breaking and referencing. Sharing universe with "To Love God - To Love Mortal" but in the future and more crazy. *You don't need to read "To Love God - To Love Mortal" to understand this story. It's just have many Easter egg for that story here.*

If you confused about chronology of this story, You can watch this timeline to help you => vavacung.deviantart.com/art/Cr…

English Editor : dracoblair.deviantart.com/

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NightSilverShadow's avatar
Tsundere? Does that mean she want more kisses from Dawn? Lenny chat emote (Reupload) 
Th3Kebab's avatar
The reason i started reading this comic was
Because I like time and space stuff and doing research on time travel.
austinman72's avatar
i kinda wish i saw that XD
austinman72's avatar
THE CAKE WAS A LIE
zombiepony100's avatar
he went into its trap
believe it or not, the first time i read this comic was before i watched any of the actual cartoon, so i didn't know what a "pinkie promise" was...but now i do:
"cross my heart and hope to fly, stick a cupcake in my eye-OW!"
StormCutie's avatar
So, wait...
If a pinkie promise is broken, does Pinkie rise from the grave to exact revenge? Or does it run from her bloodline directly to Super Surprise's responsibility?
I think she would rip a hole in the space-time continuum from a spirit dimension to extract the revenge.
midnightrose3000's avatar
BlackGlacier's avatar
OMG HAHAHAHGAHAAGHHAAHHAHA
DragonKingAlpha's avatar
Flash Fire: Once again you little weirdo. Well at least I can pat myself on the back for never trying to taste the crystals form Twilight's ca castle. 
Anti-Viruse's avatar
Sigh?  Dose that meen she want him to kiss her again?
Byakku108's avatar
Ewait does sparing have her dads cravings for gems
DemonicLucario's avatar
This comic is amazing.
SparkBrony's avatar
Nice going, Spike. XD
tails208's avatar
Well that answer my "third kiss" question
ElementalHybrid's avatar
...Damn, I don't think I could even be mad at Spike, that's amazing.
DoubleBlaze's avatar
spike what have you eat in this past year ?
MasterAnimash1996's avatar
THAT IS A LIE! THAT CASTLE IS TOTALLY EDIBLE!
mysterie2001's avatar
castle wall???!!
Foxboy5134's avatar
THATS ALOT OF MONY FROM THAT ONE WALL HE ATE
Foxboy5134's avatar
Wasn't he just eating the Crystal Cake?
vavacung's avatar
Yes. But he can't stop himself to eat crystal table and crystal wall...
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