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Crazy Future Part 58

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"It's not like I never tried to ask for permission before. I tried. But nopony let me kiss them after that and I never have chance to kiss them anymore. That's why I have to use this method "Surprise Kiss Target => Avoid Target => Wait until target clam down => Explain the reason to target."

"Anyway, It's seem like someone though that I am the one who made all of OCs Commission Cards. You are misunderstood, humans. I am not the one who created them. I am not the one who kiss all of that OCs. The ponies I was kiss will have the cards like this"

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"You can see. same background, same magic circle. It's mean It was made by the same caster. Please understand........You heard me, right humans?.........Mom! I'm done with breaking 4th wall now. Can you repair it for me, please?" ___ Alternate Dawn

"Please use 4th wall gate next time, my son. This wall really hard to repair, you know!?!" __ Twilight Sparkle

Shipping and Descendant Warning :
Spike X Rarity(Nightmare pony) = Sparity(Daughter)
Pinkie Pie X ??? = Super Surprise(Descendant)
(Spifire X Soarin) X (Daring Do X Ahuizotl) = Aerial Ace(Descendant)
Big Macintosh X Fluttershy = Apple Eden (Descendant)
Twilight Sparkle X -- Top Secret -- = Alternate Dawn(Son)

Alternate Dawn Card Collection => vavacung.deviantart.com/galler…

Warning : This story takes place 100 years after Rarity dead. This story base on season 4. So anything that happened in season 5 will have nothing to do with this story.

Warning : This story's an alternate universe and is really crazy at times. Futa-spell or the magic that can make female pony impregnate another female pony doesn't exist.

Warning : a lot of 4th wall breaking and referencing. Sharing universe with "To Love God - To Love Mortal" but in the future and more crazy. *You don't need to read "To Love God - To Love Mortal" to understand this story. It's just have many Easter egg for that story here.*

If you confused about chronology of this story, You can watch this timeline to help you => vavacung.deviantart.com/art/Cr…

English Editor : dracoblair.deviantart.com/

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XthernusAndi's avatar

Does twilight know about this?

budderman12's avatar
DOES THAT MEAN HE HAD TO KISS HIMSELF
camolotthe10's avatar
My OC: "Sure, you're hot. And, if it goes a little farther... well, then."
mnmega's avatar
The ship has sailed.
DragonofChaos06's avatar
And it's not gonna stop
DragonKingAlpha's avatar
Flash Fire: * Holding out cold Twilight.* It's okay dear we can com back when the little dork stops being a weirdo. Don't worry He is not our son he is not our son. 

Me: Uh could we have a motherly interruption here this is getting crazy. Also I do not see how this world Twilight is okay with her son doing this. 
77madman's avatar
You're all whores ans I approve
Hellshooter's avatar
*passes out from laughter*
Lavamoon0's avatar
My oc would most likely pause in surprise, then kick out his legs and kick him into a wall as he was falling. Though it sucks for her because she is a massive hybrid and when i say that she is a crystal Pegasus who has some form of demon in her genetics and some sort of ice elemental in her genetics.
speedox12's avatar
leebk201's avatar
The truth being spoken. xD
QuietTiger4ever's avatar
GOD LOL XD Y DAWN Y XD
DemonicLucario's avatar
Ok, I've think we've bailed enough water out of tis ship. I think it'll float now.
Fierce-Dities-Link's avatar
Please kick him in the balls! X3
I think it's hilarious just how upfront Alter is about all this.

He is completely innocent about all this, just "For Science" and how he gets Sparity all worked up without even trying.
yuka4608's avatar
no no no say no!!!!
DoubleBlaze's avatar
now he just being a dick
but i like him
dam
Wait0wat's avatar
Wel...um..duh...yeah, I got nothing.
lordmep's avatar
Nods with approval.
Yami-Marik93's avatar
Does this mean he has to kiss a guy to get data?
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