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Crazy Future Part 36

"She can see ghost but she fear ghost..."

Shipping and Descendant Warning :
Spike X Rarity(Nightmare pony) = Sparity(Daughter)
Pinkie Pie X ??? = Super Surprise(Descendant)
(Spifire X Soarin) X (Daring Do X Ahuizotl) = Aerial Ace(Descendant)
Big Macintosh X Fluttershy = Apple Eden (Descendant)

Warning : This story takes place 100 years after Rarity dead. This story base on season 4. So anything that happened in season 5 will have nothing to do with this story.

Warning : This story's an alternate universe and is really crazy at times. Futa-spell or the magic that can make female pony impregnate another female pony doesn't exist.

Warning : a lot of 4th wall breaking and referencing. Sharing universe with "To Love God - To Love Mortal" but in the future and more crazy. *You don't need to read "To Love God - To Love Mortal" to understand this story. It's just have many Easter egg for that story here.*

If you confused about chronology of this story, You can watch this timeline to help you =>…

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Yeetnoodlewrites's avatar
She has a third eye-? Thats cool-?
marinus18's avatar
I think Apple Eden is still one of your best creations. You can see how she's the descendant of Fluttershy and Big Mac yet she still has an identity and abilities unique to her.

*Insert "I see dead people" meme here*

QQQQT2's avatar
Awesome biblical reference and a good call to the fact that the dead would be see-able by such an old soul, good work on that.:D
3jaustin's avatar
She sees dead things, doesn't she?
Dawnfur8888's avatar
o.O   A SEER!!!!!!!!!!
ZanarNaryon's avatar
Again, great-great grandmother. How? Unless they have a really short lifespan, which I doubt, that shouldn't be possible
Aquosking's avatar
The generation gap has been all over the place in this story. It's gotten to the point where I'm just not even going to bother making sense of it.

It seems he retconned the timeline to not be 100 years after the show's 4th season, but instead 100 years after Rarity dies in this story, which makes it 170 years according to their timeline, I guess. I think that's enough time for Super Surprise to possibly make sense, but Eden might be pushing it.

I know the story is supposed to be nonsensical and absurd, but I don't think it's entirely necessary to throw around different generation gaps for every new descendant we meet in order to do that. 
QQQQT2's avatar
This story is so outrageous and all over the place that I just want to keep reading to see what happens next harhar
technically speaking horses has life span of ~20 years, so 5 generation in 100 years really isn't impossible :P  
77madman's avatar
*going though old comments* ah here it is,SHE'S A WITCH!
Hellshooter's avatar
So... Medium pony then?
Lavamoon0's avatar
AWWLove this character
glaivelord's avatar
see things normal ponies never would? i'm sorry but it's common logic for someone to suspect that a great-great grandmother alive is not dead
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RainFlower167's avatar
"I see dead ponies. They walk around like normal ponies, they don't even know their dead.
Wait0wat's avatar
She sees dead ponies. XD
glaivelord's avatar
she doesn't see dead ponies, if you we're told that a great-great grandmother is still alive, would you actually suspect her to be alive or dead? it's common logic to suspect someone who's a great great grandmother to be dead m8
Pokebreeder25's avatar
Just lIke paranorman I hated that movie
Or the Six Sense
Pokebreeder25's avatar
No seeing ghost or spirits in a thing in real life but it only work on ghost that didn't die of old age 
lordmep's avatar
A clairvoyant apple... 
I approve.
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