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Crazy Future Part 24

"Sorry. I'm just lost control my power..."

Shipping and Descendant Warning :
Spike X Rarity(Nightmare pony) = Sparity(Daughter)
Pinkie Pie X ??? = Super Surprise(Descendant)

Warning : This story takes place 100 years after Rarity dead. This story base on season 4. So anything that happened in season 5 will have nothing to do with this story.

Warning : This story's an alternate universe and is really crazy at times. Sometime it's none sense too!

Warning : a lot of 4th wall breaking and referencing. Sharing universe with "To Love God - To Love Mortal" but in the future and more crazy. *You don't need to read "To Love God - To Love Mortal" to understand this story. It's just have many easter egg for that story here.*

If you confused about chronology of this story, You can watch this timeline to help you =>…

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#FirstCrazy Future Part 01
#PreviousCrazy Future Part 23
#NextCrazy Future Part 25
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Fausha54's avatar
Wait, why is there a mare in the moon?
Aesthralavi's avatar

Because this story is a side-sequel to Love Alicorn story, where this is explained.

camolotthe10's avatar
Celestia and Best Pony Woona:
BlackGlacier's avatar
DragonKingAlpha's avatar
Flash Fire: Interesting. 
XxArrowFyre's avatar
something tells meee

great and powerful....

did pinkii marry TRIXIE?!
it may not had to be that far back in blood line, it could just be Pinkie's decendent and Trixie's decendent got "busy"
Byakku108's avatar
To fill in who her great great grand father is cheese sandwich this is one of the few shipping a I actually care about
Wait0wat's avatar
Well I guess when you have the power of "NIGHTMARE"'re automatically granted the power of days.
ChaoticNote's avatar
Re-reading this again and Luna is probably mad about this if she had seen it.
Cylestea's avatar
she is probably mad she didnt think of it 
Zalay02's avatar
XD lol Rarity can do that unintentionally, love it.
TisonVanlane's avatar
?!?!?!?!?! how did that happen?
PinkieTane's avatar
Why is Nightmare Mon on the noon again?
DragonTurtle2's avatar
I thought there was some kind of typo on your timeline, but no, Nightmare Moon really is back on the moon here.  Why?  That's too big to leave unexplained, since ANOTHER incarnation of the Nightmare is walking around.
Siarnaq21's avatar
Ever get so startled you threw the celestial bodies out of alignment?
TheHowlingStorm's avatar
Once threw a galaxy into chaos when I saw a spider
Siarnaq21's avatar
Easy, there, Tengen Toppa.
It's so embarrassing when you accidentally mess up the celestial spheres right in front of everypony.
Well its kinda nice having half day half night XD. Let it this way for one day XD.
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