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Crazy Future Part 18

"We'll try to set up a home at Ponyvile."

Shipping and Descendant Warning :
Spike X Rarity(Nightmare pony) = Sparity(Daughter)

Warning : This story takes place 100 years after Rarity dead. This story base on season 4. So anything that happened in season 5 will have nothing to do with this story.

Warning : This story's an alternate universe and is really crazy at times.

Warning : a lot of 4th wall breaking and referencing. Sharing universe with "To Love God - To Love Mortal" but in the future and more crazy. *You don't need to read "To Love God - To Love Mortal" to understand this story. It's just have many eater egg for that story here.*

If you confused about chronology of this story, You can watch this timeline to help you => Crazy Future Timeline V.2 (spoiler warning)

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Second English Editor : scarletandlunarcool.deviantart…


#FirstCrazy Future Part 01
#PreviousCrazy Future Part 17
#NextCrazy Future Part 19
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MoppyJustice's avatar
Mashra: y'know, you had left ponyville in such disasters and then again, you were only protecting ponyfolks, and your friends.

Menny: yea~ *please with himself*

Mashra: Why are you smiling like that?

Menny: you'll see~

Mashra: * was about to speak but the door suddenly open*

Manny: alright!!!! What the heck did ya do!!??!! .... I was tricked, didn't I?

both: *nod*

Manny: *sigh* why?

Menny: because we could read it just like we used to!~

both: "so cute, sad they; we changed"

Menny: oh hey look!~ 

me, dadiny, javioer, didset, and joeive: owwie, what happen?

mashra: you guys fainted.

me, dadiny, and javioer: WHAT!!!??? We missed it!!!!

mashra: mmmhmmm.

joeive: who are those?

mashra: ah, joe, they are Menny-

menny: yo!

and Manny-

Manny: hi!

, they're both twin.

joe: ah. you know, they're kinda cute~

Manny: I'm sorry, but what?

Menny: *blush only slightly * 

me: joe is genderless, jeez.

M & M: oh.

j & j: hey, why did you shorten our names?

me: I wanted to see, how long they'll figure it out who say those.

 Menny: clever~

Me: *giggles* welp, commenters, we are enjoying this a bit and it really fun, so hope you all enjoyed our funny times. Bye!
EpicBronyL's avatar
Condidering that the daughter is Evil Reincarnated, I feel like they aren't the ones ho need protecting. 
cinabunbun's avatar
wait is nightmare rarity like a thing r did u make it up cuz i wanna look more into this stuf
IlovElsa123Official's avatar
She's a thing in the comics :)
77madman's avatar
I'll assemble the liching mob
speedox12's avatar
You know, that hybrid demon spawn dragon child that was original you, but now her, but you still have her body and god damn it I need to sit down.
Wait0wat's avatar
Panel 01: haven't seen a face like that since childhood cartoons on Saturday mornings.
Uroboros18's avatar
It has really been fifteen years?
CrimsonColt7's avatar
if 4 of Twilight's Friends are "passed away", who's the new holder of the Elements ? Twilight can't possibly handle 5 of the Elements, OR COULD SHE ?
they are gone. sacrifised. and now she has a castle
Remember that even Celestia can handle the entire elements alone. Also they try not to rely on it now.
nuke1007's avatar
man it must suck for twilight to have nearly all her friends dead, and still remain to be the princess of friendship.
camolotthe10's avatar
She probably accepted their deaths long before they actually passed, and knows that they wouldn't want her to be broken up over them.

"Twilight won't outlive her friends."
- Lauren Faust
I would love that too in fact.
WorldWalker128's avatar
On the bright side, it's not like anypony alive knows what Nightmare Moon looked like, right?
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RDkinght's avatar
so... how long was the leap from part 17 to part 18?
Speedy526745's avatar
Sweet, we're back to present time.

*Spams "Back to the Future" theme*
Rarity, we all miss you here in Ponyville, Rarity
Rarity, when you left us all to pretend to still be dead, Rarity
Rarity, we thought we'd never see you again
But the only thing we hear from you is it's too dangerous

. . . Perhaps the rhymes could use some work. And the meter.
AJR001's avatar
This might not end well... Hahaha... :XD:
Sturmlion1's avatar
Hey everyone who knows you is dead! Should work out, except for the Dragon and the giant Princess scaled Pony that is.
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GraphiteHeart-Pony's avatar
aww! best family ever!!!
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