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Crazy Future Part 17

"We will meet again someday"

Shipping and Descendant Warning :
Spike X Rarity(Nightmare pony) = Sparity(Daughter)

Warning : This story takes place 100 years after Rarity dead. This story base on season 4. So anything that happened in season 5 will have nothing to do with this story.

Warning : This story's an alternate universe and is really crazy at times.

Warning : a lot of 4th wall breaking and referencing. Sharing universe with "To Love God - To Love Mortal" but in the future and more crazy. *You don't need to read "To Love God - To Love Mortal" to understand this story. It's just have many eater egg for that story here.*

Warning : This is the final flashback. The story will come back to the present in next page.

If you confused about chronology of this story, You can watch this timeline to help you => Crazy Future Timeline V.2 (spoiler warning)

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#PreviousCrazy Future Part 16
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MoppyJustice's avatar
Mashra: aaaw, so sad and yet so true.

me: men-

menny: I'm here!!!

mashra: holy star maroon!!!

menny: oh high!

mashra: hi?

menny: btw, I saw all that and she is still unconscious.

mashra: O\\\\\\\\\\\O please don't tell them.

menny: ah won't because you have a reputation going on.

mashra: ..... Remind me to give you a candy.

menny: don't need, so when are they going to wake?

mashra: idk.

menny: hm, can ah call mah brother?

mashra: sure it getting lonely.

menny: thank, and oh btw the forth wall is fixed.

mashra: ah thank, and menny?

menny: hmm?

mashra: why did you a country voice?

menny: redisgh.

mashra: ah right.

menny: hope you all like it.
EpicBronyL's avatar
And thus, spike abandons his sacred duty, the task he was charged with by the Solar Goddess herself, and leaves the person who raised him and cared for him his entire childhood. 

forgive this comment; it was passive aggressive 
camolotthe10's avatar
I feel like there should have been more freaking out there, or at least more tearful reunions. From Spike, at least, considering the love of his life- at who's grave he had been weeping scant few minutes ago- is now alive and kicking again.
speedox12's avatar
What, there not dead yet?! Surly pinky would have died from a heart attack by now!
This is the flashback of when Rairity died.
SparkingAround's avatar
atleast fluttershy isnt dead QAQ i would cry my heart out!
glaivelord's avatar
isn't sweetie belle dead? i just saw her gravestone on part 6 of the story.
great job keeping up with the storyline vavacung!
glaivelord's avatar
hold on, if rarity's child is nightmare rarity's reincarnation. how is that even possible when rarity was given the order by nightmare rarity to birth her when she died? fyi, rarity said that "the day i died" meaning that she encountered nightmare rarity when she died.
great job again vavacung! you really do keep up with your stories!
EpicBronyL's avatar
That exchange happened within the nightmares world inside rarity's soul. She was still dead. 
Sparrow9612's avatar
Narrator: Rarity is believed to be dead. She must let the world think that she is dead, until she can give birth to the dark spirit that dwells within her.
artiermis's avatar

Don't tell your own sister that you're alive when she thought you were dead.

That's not cruel at all.
TheSpiritShift's avatar
Except it actually isn't cruel. Imagine it, for a sec, that Rarity reintroduces herself back into Ponyville then, while answering the obvious questions tells them:

I'm going to outlive all of you.

I'm also giving birth to a reincarnated supervillain

Oh, and I'm leaving Ponyville while I do those two things.

But instead, this way they only suffer one grief. And Rarity comes back, unseen to their funerals each time. Sometimes what seems like cruelty is actually the greatest kindness.
FireheartTheInferno's avatar
Beautifully done. It's so heartfelt and sad :'c
catwarrior172's avatar
I thought sweetie belle is dead
I saw her grave in a past comic of this series
:-? (Confused) :-? (Confused) :-? (Confused) :-? (Confused) 
vavacung's avatar
This is flashback.
catwarrior172's avatar
yeah but when she died sweetie's already dead
vavacung's avatar
When Rarity died. Sweetie Belle still alive. That why in this flashback. She ask Twilight to not telling her sister that she already revive as Nightmare Pony. Because she don't want to upset them more than this.
GamerBoy870's avatar
Rarity comes back to life
TheWraithWriter's avatar
Cornisch's avatar
You made a mistake, in the graveyard there was a stone with the name: Sweetiebelle
vavacung's avatar
That's a future. Here a flashback.
Turtledove101's avatar
A huge part of me just died. Q-QDanisnotonfire: FEELS 
The-real-Omega's avatar
Rarity:"Will you come with me?"
Spike:" With you? anywhere rarity."
CLASIC SPIKE. Ohhh so much love. to many feels Q~Q must beat myself to regain manly hood
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