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Crazy Future Part 16

"I have to leave Ponyville..."

Shipping and Descendant Warning  :
Spike X Rarity(Nightmare pony) = Sparity(Daughter)

Warning : This story takes place 100 years after Rarity dead. This story base on season 4. So anything that happened in season 5 will have nothing to do with this story.

Warning : This story's an alternate universe and is really crazy at times.

Warning : a lot of 4th wall breaking and referencing. Sharing universe with "To Love God - To Love Mortal" but in the future and more crazy. *You don't need to read "To Love God - To Love Mortal" to understand this story. It's just have many eater egg for that story here.*

Warning : This is a flashback. If you confused about chronology of this story, You can watch this timeline to help you =>

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#FirstCrazy Future Part 01
#PreviousCrazy Future Part 15
#NextCrazy Future Part 17
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MoppyJustice's avatar
Mashra: WHAAAA!!!!?????


mashra: aaaaahh, music to me ear.
PrincessCelestiaYay2's avatar
So... That pony is rarity, but also Rarity's mother????
SpokenMind93's avatar
No she's the fusion between Rarity and Nightmare Rarity.
camolotthe10's avatar
Rarity, channeling and controlling the power of Nightmare Moon, in order to revitalize her body from "corpse" to "fully functional organic being" and keep it that way. Spike and Rarity's first child will be, more or less, a reincarnated Nightmare Moon.
Skull-Harpy's avatar
laughing while crying at the same time. you've officially made my day. ;; <3
DatGuySteaLz's avatar
I like how Twilight is like not even like Hey rarity im glad u returned from the dead but no she's like the fuck r u doing here
Wait0wat's avatar
Twilight: GET EN DA GRAVE!!!

Shows twilight stomping rarity back into the hole with one leg hood on her head.
GlitterQueen's avatar
I'm enjoying this comic! Can't wait for the next instalment! 
demiprimordialgal's avatar
B-but D: Waiiiiiii D:
And happiness left fast.
And we're back to everypony being melodramatic.
Say Whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat?! Leave Ponyville?! But she just got back with Spike and their daughter, Sparity!
Copanel-CP's avatar
Maybe the other ponies will consider Rarity from now (in the comic) as Nightmare Rarity and as a danger, so that's why she needs to leave.

Of course, it's a comic from someone's imagination.
vavacung's avatar
This is flashback....
Yeah, but I react something like that.
Kyoshi001's avatar
Bwhahaha.  not easy being an out cast so nightmare Rarity will find out.
bico-kun's avatar
Dun dun dunnnn!
Sturmlion1's avatar
Yup, she has to sleep with Spike outside Ponyville. Because Reasons....
Drayle88's avatar
Wait... No no no no no no no no no I just got caught up, this can't be all!

-watches and waits-
Drakenhof's avatar
It´s a flashback..
Drayle88's avatar
I know it is, I just caught up with all the previous pages and flailed because I had no more to read.
Goldbird13's avatar
For some reason when I saw this comment I was thinking


Idk why XD
Drayle88's avatar
Lol that would hurt a lot.
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