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Crazy Future Part 15

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"...As a Nightmare Pony!"

Shipping Warning and Descendant :
Spike X Rarity(Nightmare pony) = Sparity(Daughter)

Warning : This story takes place 100 years after Rarity dead. This story base on season 4. So anything that happened in season 5 will have nothing to do with this story.

Warning : This story's an alternate universe and is really crazy at times.

Warning : a lot of 4th wall breaking and referencing. Sharing universe with "To Love God - To Love Mortal" but in the future and more crazy. *You don't need to read "To Love God - To Love Mortal" to understand this story. It's just have many eater egg for that story here.*

Warning : This is a flashback. If you confused about chronology of this story, You can watch this timeline to help you => sta.sh/01d7zyg26tnn

English Editor : dracoblair.deviantart.com/
Second English Editor : scarletandlunarcool.deviantart…

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#First : Crazy Future Part 01
#Previous : Crazy Future Part 14
#Next : Crazy Future Part 16
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MoppyJusticeStudent Digital Artist
Mashra: aaaw, I mean gross.

..........

mashra: of all the thing I should have done, and yet I'm given this opportunity.
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forgive this comment; it wasn't accepting
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camolotthe10Hobbyist General Artist
If there is one criticism that I have, it's that the explanations for things are a little blunt.

Though I really got a kick out of Rarity completely ignoring Twilight.
Detah-Ramet's avatar
So thats where the necrophilia comes in!
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swirlieeStudent General Artist
Thats...um gross
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camolotthe10Hobbyist General Artist
... How?
I really don't see how, seriously. Rarity's body is completely alive, and is probably healthier than it was at her prime, Spike gets a raring and ready Rarity, and whether or not their child is a voluntarily wiped Nightmare is irrelevant.
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swirlieeStudent General Artist
what the flip? I dont remember this comment

and I dont remember making this comment
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camolotthe10Hobbyist General Artist
Is this one of those situations where I jerk awake, wipe the drool off my chin and notice that there's a full, four thousand to five thousand word story written on the computer in front of me? 'Cause, if so, I totally understand. That happens to me a whole bunch.
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swirlieeStudent General Artist
Maybe
This was in may

I understand this page
Idk why I wrote this was gross
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camolotthe10Hobbyist General Artist
Could have been the result of exhaustion. For example, when I'm approaching my fifty hour operational time limit, I tend to be less coherent and capable of separating memory, fantasy and reality.
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swirlieeStudent General Artist
Oooo 

I think that happened maybe lol
77madman's avatar
...well okay then
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Casirethedragon11Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Now this is a good comic :3
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speedox12Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hehehahahahaha! Oh god, it'll never be the same again.
Just another day in Equestira everypony.
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SoulflutigressStudent Traditional Artist
it's a secret but i tell Twilight and Spike anyway :D
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FireheartTheInfernoHobbyist General Artist
Oh, is that all? lol
Sturmlion1's avatar
Better Milfhood than death?
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Preach it!
Uroboros18's avatar
And in the 8th day the deity looked at the world and saw everyone was sad. And the deity said: Let there be milfs! and the world rejoyced because it was freaking awesome.
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Fantasygerard2000Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well, things changed
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Rarity: "Okay sexy time, you can join if you want to Twi!"

Twilight: "No never mind I go home bye!"
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ChaoticNoteHobbyist Writer
"You ruined the feels, Rarity! THE FEELS!" Twilight bellowed into the sky as she stormed off.
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