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Crazy Future Part 12

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"I just want to have my own life. My own destiny. My own cutie mark...My own name..."

Warning : This story takes place 100 years after Rarity dead. This story base on season 4. So anything that happened in season 5 will have nothing to do with this story.

Warning : This story's an alternate universe and is really crazy at times.

Warning : a lot of 4th wall breaking and referencing. Sharing universe with "To Love God - To Love Mortal" but in the future and more crazy.

If you confuse. Please use this timeline. Sorry for bad English.

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1mp0ss1b1e's avatar
1mp0ss1b1eHobbyist General Artist
oof rarity is asking her to have -it- lol
marinus18's avatar
This was a little too sappy. I think it would have been better to have Nightmare Rarity maintain her dignity. That third panel is perfect. You should have kept that one tear and then have her go back to being cocky.
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MoppyJusticeStudent Digital Artist
Mashra: ........ Ok, now that made me almost feels bad for her, she just wanted a perfect life.

dadiny: *fainted from the cuteness*

didset: really?

mashra: really.
EpicBronyL's avatar
If she's actually being sincere, I'm going to give you a disappointed head shake. 

Also, great job keeping secrets there Rarity; now the whole audience knows. 
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camolotthe10Hobbyist General Artist
Oh you jerk, now I'm sad for Nightmare Moon. Now I have to add her to the list of defeated villains that I feel bad for due to fannon!
BlackGlacier's avatar
I'm not gonna be commenting this series a lot, I need to skim through so i can read series after this
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DragonKingAlphaHobbyist General Artist
Flash Fire: What! I might have been to several different dimensions with several strange and interesting occurrences but I admit this takes the cake.  I am so glade I visited this dimension.  
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PapyJr13Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It's seem weird but other way it's touching
77madman's avatar
Ohhhh so when I asked it was creepy and weird but it's still weird.
I just love the phrasing, like she is just some drugged up homeless man
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speedox12Hobbyist Digital Artist
Adorable, but WHAT?!

PS: You have a lot of fun rehabilitating villains don't you?
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vavacungHobbyist Digital Artist
I believe that someone have a reason to be bad and I also believe in forgiven.
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C3ByDanaProfessional Digital Artist
Awwww, the crying!!! -sniffles- She's So cuuuute!!! 
RyanChangdaMartin's avatar
Fourth read through, still good.
kacript's avatar
So she's asking to be reincarnated through her child.
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Riuke-ZHobbyist Digital Artist
I'll sing it again:
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NecromancerKing85Hobbyist Artist
*makes a pact with the nightmare* You can have my firstborn daughter, in exchange for my soul
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SoulflutigressStudent Traditional Artist
4th panel
what she said creeped me out
Wait0wat's avatar
Insert another violin music here, but, yeah, that's...sad.
riadan's avatar
seariosly isn't spike yonger
riadan's avatar
isn't spike younger than rarity
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vavacungHobbyist Digital Artist
Yes. That why it's took them almost 200 year to have offering.
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CrimsonColt7Student Artisan Crafter
so Nyx (from Past Sins) and Rarity daughter have something in common.
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CreativeNyxHobbyist Digital Artist
That ain't nyx
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