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Crazy Future Part 03

Warning : This story takes place 100 years after season 4, so anything that happened in season 5 will have nothing to do with this story.

Warning : This story's an alternate universe and is really crazy at times.

Warning : a lot of 4th wall breaking and referencing. Sharing universe with "To Love God - To Love Mortal" but in the future and more crazy.

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Javioer: the heck!?

me: aaaw, his dream came true!

mashra: eeeww, I hope this turn dark!

dadiny: yeah right.

didset: and commenters, before you spoiled it us, we liked to read all the way, so we would know. So thank you.

joeive: what going?

didset: holy shooting star!!!

me, Javioer, and Mashra: oh hey joeive, joe.

joeive: oh, heyday!

didset: wait, you drew him after me?

me: yep, that make you older.

didset: ah.

joeive: oh hey your kinda cute!

dadiny: *look at her*

me: joe is genderless.

dadiny: oh.

joeive: we should really shortened these lines.

me: no!!!

joeive: whoopisy.

javioer: *sigh* I'm calling a fourth wall repairer.

me: thank you, I'll go get my candies.

dadiny: candies?

mashra: we switch our monises for candies now. 

Ah said didset, dadiny, and joe.
EpicBronyL's avatar
ignore this comment; it was poorly written
EpicBronyL's avatar
Ignore this comment;it was poorly written
Bleyk36's avatar
jasonanimation4's avatar
Married to a Changeling
Nightfang123's avatar
spike looks boss as fuck
DoubleBlaze's avatar
logic ? what is that
true love is everything :D
NecromancerKing85's avatar
This requires serious scientific research quickly to the lab....Now Igor pull the switch they told me I was crazy I was told that it is impossible to create a life who's crazy now BWAHAHAHAHAHAH
Wait0wat's avatar
Well she does make a poi- wait...

Spoilers....if it is accurate

this has been 100 years since they both talked...and twilight new Spike was with rarity, before the hundred years. So here are my two conclusions: either spike did biology years and years before this scene and rarity is now dead, but spike and the daughter live on. Or.....give me a minute I'm working on it
SleepyHoneyBee's avatar
Oh. Rarity. I can't believe I forgot that *face palms so hard*
MLPegasis4898's avatar
Twilight is right... :hmm: :hmm: :hmm:
kacript's avatar
Oh great, more of those hybrid species that plague cross species shippers. Well, let's see where this goes.
Flowtail's avatar
Hm. I love Spike's expression in panel 3!
But... that line in panel 2. Erugh... talk about exposition dump.
LeafpathForNowArt's avatar
Feared more than crysalis's wrath and discord's laughter......Twilight's lectures.
Killed2013's avatar
That just broke my fourth wall there...
Nice comic and interesting art style there.
Dakathi666's avatar
Listen to Twilight! She speaks the truth!
ChaosDrgon's avatar
Warning : This comic is in Engrish.
Starakira's avatar
What's an Engrish? English Irish?
Siarnaq21's avatar
The term stems from the fact that in the Japanese language, there is no L sound.  As a result, many Japanese learning English mispronounce any L as an R, i.e., Engrish, rike (like), and of course...

Free Wirry.
ChaosDrgon's avatar
It's a term that describes bad English, typically spoken by someone who's first language isn't English.

For example, "You look for bus? It be that way."

Though admittedly this comic isn't nearly as bad as some of the others I've seen.
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