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Crazy Future Part 01

A new story with red line comic style. Hope all of you will like this story...please.. .////.


Warning : This story takes place 100 years after season 4, so anything that happened in season 5 will have nothing to do with this story.

Warning : This story's an alternate universe and is really crazy at times.

Warning : a lot of 4th wall breaking and referencing. Sharing universe with "To Love God - To Love Mortal" but in the future and more crazy.

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Isenlyn's avatar
Ok, just discovered.
Gonna check that out.
DrWhoFan611's avatar
*Still beautiful as always

But I'm still gonna read anyway...
elementstar109's avatar
Omg I've read the whole thing and I'm so adding this to faves in case i wanna read it again XD
MoppyJustice's avatar
Javioer: since when did he and she have doing ?

Me: it better not to theorize this.

Mashra: it have been awhile since our last "story in comments oceans"

Me: yep, it have been awhile. Btw where dadiny?

Didset: he went out get food and drinks, although it is awhile since we met.

Mashra: ah right, and it is awhile! I can tell this will be a blast!

Dadnity: please don't jinx yourself. I clean it up the last time you jinxed yourself.

Mashra: aheh heh heh, old habits die hard right?

Everyone: *rolled eyes and smiles*

Me: well it time for our reactions to this beautiful Han- I mean hoof well drawn.

Everyone: yep!!!

Me: let get started.
Can I put colors in your painting?
CloudSky14's avatar
Vavacung how would you react if someone wants to make an animation about your story? It's so awesome.
vavacung's avatar
It will be impossible. My story is too crazy for any animator to handle.
CloudSky14's avatar
Hahaha I wish some animator would do it in the future that would be awesome! :D
camolotthe10's avatar
- 22 FIMfiction tabs open
- 108 fics in Read Later
- 6+ MLP comics of epic length bookmarked

I really need to buckle down and get rid of some of this backlog, BUT IT'S ALL SO GOOD ARG
CloudSky14's avatar
Started reading this comic yesterday and it's awesome! :3
DragonKingAlpha's avatar
I saw some of this on Youtube and though it was an awesome comic. Great job. 
Canard-Pars's avatar
same,loved the music scores too...
DragonKingAlpha's avatar
They were awesome. 
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Summer-Lime's avatar
altho i LOVE this look, artifital alicorns keep their ordinary pony lifespan
efnier's avatar
according to the comics, Cadence was a Pegasus, & Celestia & Luna where unicorns
Summer-Lime's avatar
Tia and Luna were born alacorns.
efnier's avatar
when was that explicitly stated?
Summer-Lime's avatar
One of the writers said so
Fauna-Joy's avatar
Lauren Faust herself said they were born Alicorns.
efnier's avatar
realy? i thought in the show they said that flurry Heart was the first to be born an alicorn.
Fauna-Joy's avatar
That's the show. But long before that Faust said Celestia and Luna were born Alicorns.

What they said in the show about Flurry Heart set a lot of people on edge. Not only because of what Faust said, but because there's the Journal of The Two Sisters that states they've been Alicorns since birth, and that there used to be other Alicorns out there. And that's largely considered Canon since that's the book Twilight was reading in the Castle-Mania episode.

So who knows what they intended with that comment about Flurry Heart. Most have been interpreting it to mean that Equestria has never seen the birth of an Alicorn, meaning that since the Sisters are older than Equestria, it was just them being cryptic in some way. I honestly wouldn't be surprised if there was some kind of backtrack or retcon around that statement in the future.
marinus18's avatar
Flurry Heart was simply a huge mistake that was mostly forced on them by Hasbro.

I still don't understand why they did that since preserving the bronies should be their priority and making her an insanely powerful unicorn would have worked for the plot just fine.
efnier's avatar
ya lern somthin' erry day.
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