Deviation Actions

vavacung's avatar

Chapter 17 : Past Sins

Past Sins : Are her sins really hers?

Once upon a time, a long time ago, there were two sister who were princessess.
The older one was praised and loved by all the subjects; 
The younger one never had nearly as much love and praise as her older sister. 
The Glory and Admiration towards the elder created envy in the younger one, 
Disgust, Sadness and Malice slowly creeping into her heart. 
This created the "Monster" of hatred and despair.
"The Monster" was trying to do everything to help her host, to make her beloved and praised.
But it did so without knowledge or experience, with the foolishness of a Newborn. 

This foolishness resulted in the "Monster's" and the princess' banishment from the kingdom. 

In time, the two return to the kingdom, but it was only the young princess who was forgiven her sins. 
Every shred of malice was attributed to the "Monster", said to be the source of all the evil.

Not even the fact that the "Monster" was born of the two siblings could change anything. 
Born from their mistake. Their fault. Their fight. Their sins. 
And what has "The Monster" ever done? It was only what the younger princess wanted.

So then ... are "The Monster's" sins really its?

English Editor by…


Image details
Image size
800x2547px 1.1 MB
© 2013 - 2021 vavacung
Join the community to add your comment. Already a deviant? Log In
MeowTigeress's avatar

i see what u did there

treegowth's avatar


Accurate, if not disturbing, description Luna.

CaptainRiceQuakeFox's avatar
I'm really dumb because I only got the "Past Sins" pun on re-read wow
Nightmarionette123's avatar

I got it...

Nyx is my favorite! Clapping Pony Icon - Nyx

Nyx is the best alicorn oc ever.

guest6ui78's avatar
omg the last part KJDFAHLJFHDLKJ XDDD
RECoyote's avatar
Well Life happens.
and with magic anything can happen.
CosmicDrawingCat's avatar
All I have to say is that Princess Luna is right. It isn't just all black and white,  you have to look through different perspectives to truly understand something that you yourself did not go through. So, Princess Celestia, You are treating Princess(Whatever) Nightmare Moon the someway you have been treated for the longest time, and didn't that time just feel awful? Now look through her perspective again, let us see if you are still so confident in your statement, Hm?

Wait Why did I just write that?
shadowfan190's avatar
I love celestia's face like *BRUH*
Wolfclaw15's avatar
im in tears omg
Shenronn's avatar
You go from serious to hilarious
tails208's avatar
Past sins??? That reminds me of a fanfic i read from penstroke
midnightrose3000's avatar
you mean about nyx??
tails208's avatar
Yes about nyx, i love that little filly alicorn
foldabotZ's avatar
A shout-out, perhaps?
omnimon11's avatar
Ummmm...I don't mean to make this sound weird or anything...but is the goop that Nightmare Moon's forming out of coming out of Past!Luna's plot?
SuperCyclonePro's avatar
That last panel killed me! XD
goldorakx69's avatar
celestia 100000.v is broken
Join the community to add your comment. Already a deviant? Log In