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Chaos Future 74 : Soul

"In that world. Soul are nothing but a piece of life energy. It can't be revived, rebirth or reincarnation. It's not even mind, no awareness..."


Warning : This story takes place 100 years after Rarity dead. This story base on season 4. So anything that happened in season 5 will have nothing to do with this story. (Except how CMC got their cutie mark. They have canon one)

Warning : This story's an alternate universe and is really crazy as hell. It crazy until crazy word isn't fit it anymore. It's become chaos now...

Warning : a lot of 4th wall breaking and referencing. Sharing universe with "To Love God - To Love Mortal" and "To Love Alicorn" but in the future and more crazy. And a continue story of "Crazy Future"

Warning : Don't take this story too serious or you might get headache from overthinking....

Warning : Few number of love(Comments) might make comic page take long time to complete...


#FirstChaos Future 01 : Sweetie Belle
#PreviousChaos Future 73 : Termination
#NextChaos Future 75 : Mother
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Crydius's avatar
Is there an item description for this soul? It's all in the item descriptions! Vaatividya, get on that!
Manam-Kawsr's avatar
"Now I understand why the parents of most heroes in comics are usually dead..."

Right... I guess...
ShinjitsuForever's avatar
The Soul...always beautiful...
Too bad he took an arrow to the knee... and the back of the head.... (8/
*hides bow and arrow*
There's no strategy guides for life. We're all just stumbling around pretending we know what we're doing.
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sadreaper85's avatar
Transposing Kiln, Soul of A Great Hero:
Chipped Astorian Straight Sword: A sword wielded by a hero who's name is long forgotten. The blade looks like it's seen a number of battles, strangely the chips indicate it was used more for defense. Perhaps the wielder had the blade not kill but to protect some thing precious.
Shining-Armour's avatar
It's how things are.
It's sort of like Nostalgia.
When the things are occurring, it's not exactly happy or even remotely close it.
It's the people who tell the stories of it later after time has passed that make it beautiful. Sometimes you are that storyteller... to yourself.
DracoBlair's avatar
Awwwww :( Poor thing :(
Pandagirl5's avatar
What happened to Fluttershy is my only question here also keep up the good work with the comics I love this concept found them a couple weeks ago and I've been addicted to them ever since Lol

Lavamoon0's avatar
... could twilight bind that soul to a golumn, or maybe lightmare rarity could
No, it wouldn't work, the nature of souls in Dark Souls is rather different from how is is in most media. In DS souls are more a kind of form of life force, they empower living beings who are drawn to them as their light provides comfort as well a kind of fulfillment and strength. They are born of Light, fire from the First Flame, and play very little into defining sense of self, with only the three Great Lord Souls seeming to possibly allow self to develop.

Humanity, on the other hand, IS important to maintaining a sense of self, it is derived from the replicating pieces of the unique Lord Soul that the Furtive Pygmy found, the Dark Soul, which was a manifestation of the Dark rather then Light. It fulfilled something essential to being and living, providing a different form of comfort then the Soul. The unique Dark of Humanity seems to be different from the Dark the sad Hollow creatures that were drawn to the First Flame dwelled in , which was possibly the Abyss, it allowed them to develop a sense of self.

Whenever the light if the First Flame starts to fade The undead Curse begins to appear, marking it's victims with the Dark Sign. When a undead dies it is resurrected at a Bonfire but they lose something. Their souls are dropped at their place of death, but some of their Humanity leeks away through the Dark Sign, taking some of what made them themselves with it, causing hollowing: a slow return to the empty Hollow state that humans were in before they found the First Flame. The consumption of new Humanity can restore Undead to a healthy state and help guard against passive loss of Humanity and Self from The Curse, however it cannot restore what was lost, the memories and parts of self, those are gone forever. In addition without a healthy supply of humanity and perhaps a purpose to give a Undead reason to persist then their sense of self can slowly drain away, sliver by sliver, even if they don't die.

AJ's husband hollowed completely, everything that made him well HIM what lost, reducing him to a mindless Hollow shell trying to fill the void within it with souls. There is NOTHING that can restore him, what made him who he was is gone, all that's left is the life force that made him strong.
Reisen514's avatar
It's like every place you go, you see destruction and chaos. It's hard to find peace within a world of fantasy.
tigreanpony's avatar
Oh that was really nicely done. I really like how this went , great job.
Wabefuhon's avatar
Why do I get the feeling this isn't AJ?
DragonofChaos06's avatar
"We might have finally come back to this peacefull land ..." so does this means that her husband came from equestria too ? 😲
misiotheminer22's avatar
Pretty sure it's just a figure of speech, I think she meant her "coming back" and him tagging along, but I could be wrong
foldabotZ's avatar
No, it could mean that she told him about Equestria and then he wished he could live there with her.
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DeskManiac's avatar
"Now I understand why parents of most heroes in comics are dead..." I'm sorry, this actually made me laugh.
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