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Chaos Future 53 : Unravel

"Little AJ...What you did the whole time is killing her...not saving her..."


Warning : This story takes place 100 years after Rarity dead. This story base on season 4. So anything that happened in season 5 will have nothing to do with this story. (Except how CMC got their cutie mark. They have canon one)

Warning : This story's an alternate universe and is really crazy as hell. It crazy until crazy word isn't fit it anymore. It's become chaos now...

Warning : a lot of 4th wall breaking and referencing. Sharing universe with "To Love God - To Love Mortal" and "To Love Alicorn" but in the future and more crazy. And a continue story of "Crazy Future"

Warning : Don't take this story too serious or you might get headache from overthinking....

Warning : Few number of love(Comments) might make comic page take long time to complete...


#FirstChaos Future 01 : Sweetie Belle
#PreviousChaos Future 52 : Undead Applejack
#NextChaos Future 54 : False Belief
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Pixel0810's avatar

Look at Rarity’s face as she eats the apple lol

correction, you tried to kill somePony... lol
SquawkingBird's avatar
I love it when ANYONE gets the realization that they are doing something morally wrong on their face.
MLP Emote Twilight Sparkle Seductive Flirtatious 
Why do i love it? Because characters like her grow from the realization.
SolarHEclipse's avatar
Rarity is just noming in the background
Wyverntooth's avatar
If Applejack wanted to make her point undeniably clear, she could have taken that sword out and skewered herself, respawned at the bonfire and come back to LJ and Rarity while looking like beef jerky before absorbing some ponynity(Humanity)
camolotthe10's avatar
That... may not be how it would work.
The Darksign is a mark that appears on the Undead to mark them as such: while it makes them functionally immortal, it also saps their will and individuality, if they do not have a purpose or abundant Humanity. However, the Darksign stems from the magic of the Dark Soul, which was placed by the Furtive Pygmy inside every human and multiplies with them: as such, it is technically a "dark" power, one that the powers of Harmony may or may not purge from AJ's soul.
Wyverntooth's avatar
Fair. Didn't think about that part of it
wolfpup9404's avatar
AJ is still best pony
TheRubyTales's avatar
Don't worry little AJ, everyone make mistakes... And sins
SquawkingBird's avatar
Killing someone by accident isn't  a mistake or sin anyone should have, that is something to worry about.

You gotta work on your pep talking
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TheRubyTales's avatar
Man this coment is one year old why are you doing this?
SquawkingBird's avatar
All because a comment is old doesn't make it unreplyable. You know that.
TheRubyTales's avatar
Yeah but What's the point of doing so?, i mean i don't even remember why i writed it
SquawkingBird's avatar
So, a comment is a comment, you're literally asking ME why i comment on a comment, your comment. If you dont want people commenting on your comment, then don't comment.
Once you post it, it's free reign no mstter how long ago it is.
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TheRubyTales's avatar
It's not that i dont like it, it's that i dont see why, i was more stupid then
Oh naw, gurl. Too late. Pick up da sword.... >8)
RDkinght's avatar
It could have been worst. You could have actually killed her...
PonyUpToday's avatar
Judge (Serious) [V2] Little AJ, You are here to day under the accusation that you attempted to kill Miss Rarity, the other day what is your testimony
Then, she takes off her wig and tosses it in Twiley's face..... to my satisfaction. >8)
You can't say that Rarity didn't tell you that you were trying to kill her. Don't act so surprised.
vavacung's avatar
But she really didn't tell her...You don't see Rarity said that to her at all.
Manam-Kawsr's avatar
Apple Jack...
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Being honestly until today... 
Setakarn's avatar
"Dont forget to pay for that apple" xD
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