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Chaos Future 05 : Soul Transfer

"She seen you when you gone...." - Princess Twilight


Warning : This story takes place 100 years after season 4, so anything that happened in season 5 will have nothing to do with this storay. (Except how CMC got their cutie mark. They have canon one)

Warning : This story's an alternate universe and is really crazy as hell. It crazy until crazy word isn't fit it anymore. It's become chaos now...

Warning : a lot of 4th wall breaking and referencing. Sharing universe with "To Love God - To Love Mortal" and "To Love Alicorn" but in the future and more crazy. And a continue story of "Crazy Future"

Warning : Don't take this story too serious or you might get headache from overthinking....

Warning : You didn't paid me enough love(Comments) I deserve. Next comic will be post in Monday. Bye!!


#FirstChaos Future 01 : Sweetie Belle
#PreviousChaos Future 04 : Sweetie Golem
#NextChaos Future 06 : Soulless Doll
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Sarahdawolf's avatar
I’ve heard of Sweetie Bot....owo
BC-LS's avatar
Sweetie Bot?! I know her from QuizUp!!
Cliff-Robotnik's avatar
..all i can think is "Horn Blow-out...ouch."
RimeFox's avatar
Sweetie Bot also exists in FoE universe.. a reference?
Hebbocake's avatar
Is this a Hachi/Hachiko reference?
DoireannCrowley's avatar
"she never told any pony" but she did tell that other pony. You should really try and work on your story telling ability. This is a really great story but needs some work. 
Not every pony should sense or see something different with the main characters. If you read back and follow through it, a lot of the ponies suspected something was different about the main characters you have here.
Shenronn's avatar
This is like that story about a dog that would always wait for its owner to return at the train station.But one day, the owner went on his journey and the dog waited as usual, but the owner never came back and the dog stayed until it died.
tails208's avatar
That was a great and sad movie...
And then a long time in the future the fossil of the dog was found....
PapyJr13's avatar
ZanarNaryon's avatar
Wow, this is gonna give Nightmare guilt
Animatorsnake's avatar
It's official, she's now going to be called Sweetie Bolem (half bot-golem)
Geez, the spell was so strong that it shattered her horn.
Sturmlion1's avatar
MiragePotato's avatar
Sweetie Belle's Science "I Do What I Must, Because I Can"
florfru's avatar
poor sweetie bell
ServantPhoenix's avatar
Looking at and touching your own dead body... Probably wasn't a nice experience.
So she was smart enough to build and transfer a soul but not smart enough to invite nightmare rarity over to dinner or go see her?
vavacung's avatar
Because Nightmare Moon left Ponyvile for almost 200 years with Spike and nopony know where she gone.
PsycoJosho's avatar
I wonder how cutie marks work for golems with souls transferred to them...
Dang it. No feels today! Get out!
*shuts the door*
Well of course. You can't very well maintain two bodies with only one soul, and ponies can get the wrong idea when they find that you're planning to remove your soul from your body.
This actually reminds me of a World of Darkness fan-splat that I've been reading through called Genius: The Transgression. It's about mad scientists who can make unnatural inventions through the sheer power of their inspiration. They gain this power in a process called catalyzing which involves them obsessing over something to the point where they just have to pursue it, and that project is usually their first invention.

So yeah, kinda' reminds me of this. But with pones.
THEMYA47's avatar
Whoa bro ;-; </3 just whoa bro.
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