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Cyber Goth-Lolita-Version 2 by Valesco Cyber Goth-Lolita-Version 2 by Valesco
second version. since i am very unsure about backgrounds, stll. i'd be pleased if you compared it to my first idea:
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and told me which you liked better and why.
thanks very much!
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digital-Rat Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2010  Student Digital Artist
Can't go wrong with green and black! :D Simple but awesome color scheme! I really love her boots and you did an amazing job with the details and clothing folds. :)
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Valesco Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2010  Hobbyist
oha, thanks for this praise very much!
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cryptfever Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2010
I prefer this one. Your attention is supposed to be drawn to the figure and I think the dark background and bright greens of the other version smother her a bit.

I will also add that the rendering of her clothing is very good (particularly good attention to detail - wrinkles on the waist, shine on the boots)

In my opinion what I think is lacking is the skintone. It's too yellow (like a simpsons character). I would get hold of some skin colour palettes [link] and other free tutorials on here to get some ideas. There are many colours to convey a pale skin other than yellow. Trick is allowing yourself to experiment. :)
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Valesco Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2010  Hobbyist
hey, thanks for the critique! yes, i should use rather pale skin colours in here, since the gothic scene tends to whiten itself :D
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cryptfever Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2010
You're welcome. Good job! :)
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Janezy-and-her-Tea Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
I think this version is a bit better as the doilies in the background of other version have a terribly low resolution.
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