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EDIT: fixed some stuff thanx to the critique from both =90Malik90 and ~WhitexRaven ! thank you both so much, I hope it looks better now!

yeah finally finished xDD I really want to get better at using vectors, so I made this!or well, the scetch was done over a month ago or so, but I thought it would be nice to finish it!

it's...pretty different from what I usually draw I guess? XD but meh, I don't care about that~


I hope you'll like it, and I'm open for critiques on it because -like I said- I want to get better at using vectors xD


aaand to end this, because I know at least someone are gonna ask me about the pink line in his face, that's...well, I like adding such lines like that, it's not the first time I've done it xD I don't know why, I've always liked it!
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Since vectors resemble pop art a lot, there are many traps to fall in by removing the lines, but I think you managed to steer clear out of the possible faults - the fact that there are no outlines just makes the whole piece more colourful.

Your perspective skills are flawless, as usual (but without being exaggerated like they sometimes are). I love the time you spent on the water, seeing as the attention is drawn towards the ocean right after the character (who is framed into the picture very well). Although, the way he is splashing at the water makes it look a slight bit like slime. The way it looks like, he's traveling at quite a high speed, and even though only his fingers are touching the water, more should have come splashing up.

Another point I would like to comment on, is the way you drew the clouds. By the sun and the water, they're very wellmade but still vector-like, which is good. But as they go up, they've become more shabby, also resembling slime a bit. They also don't quite fit with the perspective and the darkened colour higher up. Well, this is just my opinion.

The colours are refreshingly clear, and despite it containing sharp lines, it's faded out in a good way, so in that aspect you did well. The next part is his eyes. I like the little stars and the way the colour fades and blends together. But I would have liked to see just a little more life in them, seeing as even with the stars in them they look a bit empty. Maybe a brighter colour somewhere, or a small light sparkle.

All in all, it's a very refreshing piece, and you did well! :)
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:iconcasualartist89:
casualartist89 Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2014  Student Artist
amazing  100% great art
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casualartist89 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2014  Student Artist
awsome
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patchisforest Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2010
I love how you drew the water!
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:iconvalerei:
Valerei Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
yay, thank you C:
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BR0KEN-TYP3-WRIT3R Featured By Owner May 25, 2010  Student Writer
This is different for you. Its more...happy? Well whatever it is, I like it! I especially like his shoes. And his goggles. You know what you could do? Just say the line is a shadow, that's what I thought. Anyways, great job!
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:iconvalerei:
Valerei Featured By Owner May 27, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
yeah, I do like iteven if it's different xD makes me wanna draw more stuff like it xD
aah, really? okay xD

and thank you!
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Norbiej Featured By Owner May 20, 2010
really awesome piece of art :D
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:iconvalerei:
Valerei Featured By Owner May 22, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you so much x3
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x-spader-x Featured By Owner May 11, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
OMGosh so cute, It gave me a totall summer boost!
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:iconvalerei:
Valerei Featured By Owner May 22, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I'm glad it did!! XD
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carroswensson Featured By Owner May 11, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Tuff :D
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:iconvalerei:
Valerei Featured By Owner May 22, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
tack!!
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Lindz0r Featured By Owner May 10, 2010
Titeln sunny air låter ju typ som ett namn på en tecknad figur, fast Sonny Air XD
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:iconvalerei:
Valerei Featured By Owner May 10, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
men oh god vad dåligt! nästa såa tt jag vill döpa snubben till det xD
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Lindz0r Featured By Owner May 11, 2010
men visst lät det som ett sånt namn? XD tänker mest på såna serier som brukar gå på fox kids o sånt, där brukar de coola grabbarna ha såna namn XD haha
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haruko-doe Featured By Owner May 10, 2010
Cool shoes!
Je veux les chausseurs!
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:iconvalerei:
Valerei Featured By Owner May 22, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you!
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:iconsayajin-kun:
Sayajin-kun Featured By Owner May 10, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Man blir så glad av den här! Då önskar man bara att vädret var bättre också. Så det matchar den här happiness-heten och inte makes me sad again... FUUUUU!! :iconffffplz:

Oh, ignore weather rant, I really enjoy this pic that's all. c:
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Valerei Featured By Owner May 22, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
hahaah, men vafan, vet känslan xD men äääh, nu är det ju ganska somrigt ute, mer passande då!
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Sayajin-kun Featured By Owner May 22, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Precis, inte klaga på vädret nu. Även om man denna vacka soliga dag spenderade instängd vid stekbordet i ett rum utan luftkonditionering och med lagar på långbyxor... c:

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(Nä, jag klagar inte på vädret. Då vill jag hellre att det håller i sig. x3 )
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:iconprincesse-de-la-lune:
awesome ^_^

i want those goggles :D
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:iconvalerei:
Valerei Featured By Owner May 22, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
so do I! xD
thank you!
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:iconcarsis:
Carsis Featured By Owner May 9, 2010  Professional Interface Designer
Beautiful concept :D
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:iconvalerei:
Valerei Featured By Owner May 22, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thanx!! ;)
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LinusRe Featured By Owner May 9, 2010  Professional General Artist
Shit, svinigt snyggt, du börjar bli riktigt bra med vektorer!

En tanke bara, det färgade blänket i vattnet känns väldigt grönt, skulle nog se ännu bättre ut om det var mer rödfärgat som att det reflekterar håret, en rätt lite grej, men skulle nog ge bilden lite extra polering. :)
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Valerei Featured By Owner May 9, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
oj, tackar tackar :)

aah, asså det värsta är att jag hade det ifrån början, man kan nog fortfarande se liiite oranget blänk titta fram bakom splashet! men sedan gjorde jag mer splashande vid hans hand vilket täckte över det mesta!
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MangaThePanda Featured By Owner May 9, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Jag måste verkligen säga, det här är nog en av mina favorit bilder från dig :D Färgläggningen, helt amazing och detaljerat, speciellt vattnet, och sedan utan linjer, WOW! Måste ha tagit väldigt lång tid för dig att göra den här bilden :D Gjorde du den med en tablet?
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:iconvalerei:
Valerei Featured By Owner May 22, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
nejmen tack så jättemycket, är faktiskt en utav mina favoritbilder med just nu!
och ja, den är gjord med en tablet!
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Sleepyheadphone Featured By Owner May 9, 2010  Student General Artist
Awesome style as always. Simple but genius. And this picture is just brilliant because its so sunny and it gets me a summer-mood.
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:iconvalerei:
Valerei Featured By Owner May 22, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
why thank you so much :3
and yeah, I think about summer everytime I see it! I'm glad I actually managed to draw something like it!
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PRllNCE Featured By Owner May 9, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
Vad bra det blev när du tog bort molnen. :D Nu blev perspektivet snyggare. Och ögonen blev verkligen sketbra sådär! :0 Splashandet lär ha varit svårt, men det ser mer splashigt ut nu än tidigare i alla fall. ^^
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Valerei Featured By Owner May 9, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
ja, det blev mycket bättre, precis som det var i början xD jag la till dom molnen för att testa, blev inte öjd men glömde ta bort dom xd bra att du kom å påminde mig ;)
å ögonen var krångliga, fick tillslut till något iaf XD
och splashande är inte lätt att rita i vektorer kan jag säga, men det gick relativt bra!
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PRllNCE Featured By Owner May 9, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
Ja, det blev lite suddigt vid splashet på något sätt, men det ser bra ut så! Är det för "fast" ser du ju ofta ut som slime. xD
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Valerei Featured By Owner May 9, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
jaa, men det är för att med vektorer så måste man göra femtioelva lager i tunn opacitet typ för att kunna få det att se lite "målat" ut, vilket va vad som hände där XD men det passar nästan bättre än helt rena linjer på vatten!
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WhitexRaven Featured By Owner May 9, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow, very nice <3
It looks quite a bit better now.
I'm glad you found my critique helpful, I wasn't quite sure if it would be. ~
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Valerei Featured By Owner May 9, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
but it was really helpful! and I agree, it does look better like this!
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Umbri-girl Featured By Owner May 9, 2010
Oh awesome you fixed that weird cloud. Or... deleted it.
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:iconvalerei:
Valerei Featured By Owner May 9, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
yess, it was meant to be deleted to begin with, but I forgot about it xD so now it looks like I wanted it plus some better stuff thanx to the critique I got xD
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Sanjoh Featured By Owner May 9, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Lite annorlunda från det vanliga det här. Tycker om vattnet. 8D
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:iconvalerei:
Valerei Featured By Owner May 9, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
ja, jag vet! men det var bara skoj! å tack, gillar oxå vattnet!
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LadyVentuswill Featured By Owner May 9, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Vilka mysiga färger!
skitsnyggt! :D
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:iconvalerei:
Valerei Featured By Owner May 9, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
hihi, tackar tackar : D
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Endless-Ness Featured By Owner May 9, 2010  Student Filmographer
Wow your style looks really cool with vectors!
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:iconvalerei:
Valerei Featured By Owner May 9, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
yay, I'm glad you think so x3
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BUBBLE89 Featured By Owner May 9, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Tycker om den jättemycket! :D En så himla glad bild. Älska~:heart:
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:iconvalerei:
Valerei Featured By Owner May 9, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
hihi, men det är ju bra, tycker själv jättemycket om den x3
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BUBBLE89 Featured By Owner May 9, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Det ska du göra <3
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:iconaltara:
Altara Featured By Owner May 9, 2010
Det ser verkligen ut som om du har lagt ner tid på den här. Det är den bästa bilden jag har sett dig göra på ett tag.
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:iconvalerei:
Valerei Featured By Owner May 9, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
oh, tackar tackar, det var ingen dålig kommentar! men jo, spenderade ovanligt lång tid på den(för att vara jag med digitala prylar) så är glad att det syns!
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