Very beautiful girl! I do love brunettes. I love how the sun just warms the room up. The room is very cozy and soft. The room and lighting compliment her soft, petite curves. I like also her heart panties. They show a bit of innocence. The look on her face and the look in her eye also show this innocence. My critique would be of the towel. I think it is interesting for you to have her drape it over her shoulders as if she was heading to the shower. I really like the idea. However I would think that a thinner towel would have looked better. Or possibly the same one just rolled up a bit more. It seems too big and is covering up the shape of her shoulders too much. You see her beautiful soft skin and delicate curves and then-TOWEL SHAWL! Or my issue with it could simply be the color of the towel. Something other than black would have matched the overall mood of the piece better. I think a color change would be the best thing for it. I hate to judge this one picture without see the other pictures from the shoot. I am curious to see how it would look from different angles. Beautiful girl and great camera and light work.