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Fixing Movies: Alita: Battle Angel
Vector and Chiren are the main villains. Nova wouldn't be mentioned until the ending. The problem with Vector was that because of how often Nova used his body, the character had very little agency of his own. Instead of Zapan just happening to have a sword made from the same technology as Alita's berserker body, Alita finds it with her berserker body. When Grewishka comes into the bar, he simply says he's working for Vector, no mention of Nova. Take out the taking out her heart scene. It just doesn't translate well into film. Instead of Chiren saving Hugo by attaching his head to Alita's heart, Alita is forced to kill Hugo. Hugo's death s
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Fixing Movies: Superman IV: The Quest for Peace
With the Kents dead, Clark has inherited the farm. He is still with Lana Lang. She was way better than Margot Kidder's Lois Lane. Clark has moved a Kryptonian energy module from the Fortress of Solitude to into the barn in case of an emergency. Returning to Metropolis, Clark learns the Daily Planet has been taken over by Morgan Edge and Cat Grant is the new editor. Lara reveals to Superman that after Brainiac took Argo City, the ecological damage caused Krypton to begin a world war for resources that eventually destroyed their world with devastating weapons. Seeing the parallels with the Cold War, Superman goes to the UNGA and announces he i
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Fixing Movies: The Lego Batman Movie
Okay, first off, the movie is very confusing about the Batman universe. All of Batman's history has happened but somehow he's never had a Robin or Batgirl. Instead, I'm gonna establish that he has had sidekicks before but fired them for either not being broody enough (Dick Grayson, Barbara Gordon, Tim Drake, Cassandra Cain, Stephanie Brown and Kate Kane) or being too broody even by his standards (Jason Todd, Jean Paul Valley and Damien Wayne). Instead of Barbara being the new commissioner, it would be an original character, lets call her Alicia Wilson. Batman's reason for being against her plan to structure the police force to function with
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Supergirl II (1986)
So this movie would be a sequel to the 1984 movie Supergirl or at least my fix on that movie. Since this movie was supposed to launch a whole franchise, I've decided to pitch a sequel that would be released two years after. After the events of the first movie, Linda Lee is still attending high school with Lucy Lane and Ethan. Zor-El is close to freeing Argo City from Brainiac's ship but is unsure if its even a good idea after learning of Zod's attempt to take over Earth six years ago. Selena Luthor has managed to avoid arrest of claiming that the Omega Drive made her do all her villainous acts. Remembering information the Omega Drive gav
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Fixing Movies: Escape Room
First off, the opening scene will not be a flash forward. It revealed to us that Ben would live to that point and we all knew that he would somehow get out of the room because having us get invested in a character we know will die is stupid. So instead we set this scene at the start of the movie with a different character, Bill Alderson, who ends up being crushed to death. So then we have shy physics student Zoey Leavenworth, young trader Jason Quentin, pyrophobic war veteran Amanda Kazan, former miner Mike Holloway and escape room enthusiast Danny Rennes (I'm naming them all after prisons like a certain Canadian sci-fi horror film released
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Fixing TV Shows: Black Mirror (Season 3)
Nosedive The point is supposed to be that the rating system is bad. Unfortunately, what we are shown is Lacie making a string of horrible decisions. During an argument with Ryan, Lacie would admit she's not actually happy with the rating system and is only trying to keep her score up because that's how society works now. Instead of causing a huge scene, Lacie is merely insistent on finding some solution to the no available scenes problem. The receptionist and people waiting behind Lacie rate her negatively, causing her score to go down. We don't have need the security to get involved, Lacie decides to just leave before her rating sinks furt
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Fixing Movies: Glass
Three weeks after Split, David Dunn, called the Overseer, is still searching for Kevin Wendell Crumb AKA the Horde and his boss Elijah Snow AKA Mr. Glass. He is being helped by his second son, 15 year old Daniel Dunn, allured to in Unbreakable, who has inherited his father's superpowers and is operating as a sidekick. Its explained that Mr. Glass' brittle bone disease has gotten worse with age. He's still in a wheelchair because even walking can break his bones. M. Night's character tells David that his name is Vick Ran (from Lady in the Water) and he is writing the Cookbook. The actual plot of the movie doesn't work because we already kno
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Fixing Movies: Split
We start the movie off thinking that Claire is our main character. She and Marcia offer Casey Cooke a ride home. As the girls wait for Claire's father in her car, he is killed by Dennis who kidnaps them all. Dr. Fletcher is a bit more of a villain. I mean she refuses to bring back Kevin despite him not being in control for two years. Dr. Fletcher learns that John Jordan, played by Bruce Willis, has been stalking Kevin Crumb. John grabs hold of Kevin before looking surprised and letting him go. Instead of Casey apparently knowing what to do, we have Claire call the shots out of the girls. She comes up with the plan for Marcia to escape thro
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Fixing Movies: Unbreakable
Okay, the whole movie feels like the first act of a movie. So I'm gonna shortened it into actually being the first act of the movie. We take out the part where David tries to cheat on his wife. Its not a good way to introduce your protagonist. Its explained that its only David's bones that are unbreakable. He can still scar, explaining Bruce Willis' acne scars and ear piercing. We take out the plot line about David asking if he's ever been ill (which would be longer be an issue as only his bones are unbreakable here) or injured. Does David have no memory of this? We have a in Elijah's room, what appears to a conspiracy board of various di
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Fixing Movies: Alita: Battle Angel
Vector and Chiren are the main villains. Nova wouldn't be mentioned until the ending. The problem with Vector was that because of how often Nova used his body, the character had very little agency of his own. Instead of Zapan just happening to have a sword made from the same technology as Alita's berserker body, Alita finds it with her berserker body. When Grewishka comes into the bar, he simply says he's working for Vector, no mention of Nova. Take out the taking out her heart scene. It just doesn't translate well into film. Instead of Chiren saving Hugo by attaching his head to Alita's heart, Alita is forced to kill Hugo. Hugo's death s
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Fixing Movies: Superman IV: The Quest for Peace
With the Kents dead, Clark has inherited the farm. He is still with Lana Lang. She was way better than Margot Kidder's Lois Lane. Clark has moved a Kryptonian energy module from the Fortress of Solitude to into the barn in case of an emergency. Returning to Metropolis, Clark learns the Daily Planet has been taken over by Morgan Edge and Cat Grant is the new editor. Lara reveals to Superman that after Brainiac took Argo City, the ecological damage caused Krypton to begin a world war for resources that eventually destroyed their world with devastating weapons. Seeing the parallels with the Cold War, Superman goes to the UNGA and announces he i
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Fixing Movies: The Lego Batman Movie
Okay, first off, the movie is very confusing about the Batman universe. All of Batman's history has happened but somehow he's never had a Robin or Batgirl. Instead, I'm gonna establish that he has had sidekicks before but fired them for either not being broody enough (Dick Grayson, Barbara Gordon, Tim Drake, Cassandra Cain, Stephanie Brown and Kate Kane) or being too broody even by his standards (Jason Todd, Jean Paul Valley and Damien Wayne). Instead of Barbara being the new commissioner, it would be an original character, lets call her Alicia Wilson. Batman's reason for being against her plan to structure the police force to function with
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Supergirl II (1986)
So this movie would be a sequel to the 1984 movie Supergirl or at least my fix on that movie. Since this movie was supposed to launch a whole franchise, I've decided to pitch a sequel that would be released two years after. After the events of the first movie, Linda Lee is still attending high school with Lucy Lane and Ethan. Zor-El is close to freeing Argo City from Brainiac's ship but is unsure if its even a good idea after learning of Zod's attempt to take over Earth six years ago. Selena Luthor has managed to avoid arrest of claiming that the Omega Drive made her do all her villainous acts. Remembering information the Omega Drive gav
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Fixing Movies: Escape Room
First off, the opening scene will not be a flash forward. It revealed to us that Ben would live to that point and we all knew that he would somehow get out of the room because having us get invested in a character we know will die is stupid. So instead we set this scene at the start of the movie with a different character, Bill Alderson, who ends up being crushed to death. So then we have shy physics student Zoey Leavenworth, young trader Jason Quentin, pyrophobic war veteran Amanda Kazan, former miner Mike Holloway and escape room enthusiast Danny Rennes (I'm naming them all after prisons like a certain Canadian sci-fi horror film released
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Fixing TV Shows: Black Mirror (Season 3)
Nosedive The point is supposed to be that the rating system is bad. Unfortunately, what we are shown is Lacie making a string of horrible decisions. During an argument with Ryan, Lacie would admit she's not actually happy with the rating system and is only trying to keep her score up because that's how society works now. Instead of causing a huge scene, Lacie is merely insistent on finding some solution to the no available scenes problem. The receptionist and people waiting behind Lacie rate her negatively, causing her score to go down. We don't have need the security to get involved, Lacie decides to just leave before her rating sinks furt
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Fixing Movies: Glass
Three weeks after Split, David Dunn, called the Overseer, is still searching for Kevin Wendell Crumb AKA the Horde and his boss Elijah Snow AKA Mr. Glass. He is being helped by his second son, 15 year old Daniel Dunn, allured to in Unbreakable, who has inherited his father's superpowers and is operating as a sidekick. Its explained that Mr. Glass' brittle bone disease has gotten worse with age. He's still in a wheelchair because even walking can break his bones. M. Night's character tells David that his name is Vick Ran (from Lady in the Water) and he is writing the Cookbook. The actual plot of the movie doesn't work because we already kno
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Fixing Movies: Split
We start the movie off thinking that Claire is our main character. She and Marcia offer Casey Cooke a ride home. As the girls wait for Claire's father in her car, he is killed by Dennis who kidnaps them all. Dr. Fletcher is a bit more of a villain. I mean she refuses to bring back Kevin despite him not being in control for two years. Dr. Fletcher learns that John Jordan, played by Bruce Willis, has been stalking Kevin Crumb. John grabs hold of Kevin before looking surprised and letting him go. Instead of Casey apparently knowing what to do, we have Claire call the shots out of the girls. She comes up with the plan for Marcia to escape thro
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Fixing Movies: Unbreakable
Okay, the whole movie feels like the first act of a movie. So I'm gonna shortened it into actually being the first act of the movie. We take out the part where David tries to cheat on his wife. Its not a good way to introduce your protagonist. Its explained that its only David's bones that are unbreakable. He can still scar, explaining Bruce Willis' acne scars and ear piercing. We take out the plot line about David asking if he's ever been ill (which would be longer be an issue as only his bones are unbreakable here) or injured. Does David have no memory of this? We have a in Elijah's room, what appears to a conspiracy board of various di
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Fixing Movies: Jaws 2
Prior to a new hotel opening on Amity Island, a great white shark ambushes and kills two divers photographing the wreckage of the Orca. Their camera, which triggered during the attack, is recovered. The shark then kills a female water skier. The driver fends off the shark using a gas tank and flare gun, causing the boat to explode, which kills the driver and burns the shark's face. A killer whale carcass with large bites is found beached. Police Chief Martin Brody, who is suffering from PTSD after the events of the first film, believes a shark is responsible for these events. Brody explains his concerns to Mayor Larry Vaughn, who doubts the t
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Fixing Movies: Tron Legacy
In 1989, seven years after the events of the first film, Kevin Flynn, who has been recently promoted CEO of ENCOM International, disappears. Twenty years later, his son Sam, now ENCOM's primary shareholder, takes little interest in the company beyond playing an annual prank on its board of directors. After being freed from police custody for his most recent prank, Sam is asked by Alan Bradley, an ENCOM executive and Flynn's old friend, to investigate a strange pager message originating from Flynn's shuttered video arcade. Sam discovers a large computer in a hidden basement, which suddenly digitizes and downloads him into the Grid, a virtual
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Fixing Movies: After Earth
The whole intro about the Ranger Corps, S'Krell, Ursas and ghosting will be removed. Kitai still blames himself for the death of his sister Senshi at the hands of an Ursa and trains to become a Ranger. Cypher is not a ranger, he's a normal father who views Kitai with concern at how he's handling his grief. During a flight, the spaceship is caught by an asteroid shower forcing them to crash-land on the now-quarantined Earth. There is no Ursa on board the ship. Instead it is another evolved animal that doesn't need fear to sense where people are. Both of Cypher's legs are broken, and the main beacon for firing a distress signal is damaged. C
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Fixing Movies: Godzilla
The main differences are gonna be;Less rainy nighttime scenes.Godzilla is resistant to human weapons and has atomic breath. Godzilla does not have a nest and there are no hatchlings.A marine iguana nest is exposed to the fallout of radiation following a military nuclear test in French Polynesia. In the South Pacific Ocean, a Japanese fishing vessel is suddenly attacked by an enormous sea creature, with only one seaman surviving. Traumatized, he is questioned by a mysterious Frenchman in a hospital regarding what he saw, to which he only replies "Gojira." Dr. Niko "Nick" Tatopoulos, an NRC scientist, is in the Chernobyl exclusion zone in Ukra
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Fighting with My Family
The movie follows the actual journey of professional wrestler Saraya "Paige" Bevis, growing up in a household of professional wrestlers to winning the WWE Divas Championship in 2014. It has at least half a dozen laugh out loud moments. The oddball dynamics and conflicts within the family work well. Paige's inner struggles could have been done better. I get that the protagonist has to have something to overcome but her self-doubt was spread way too long. This doubt even occurs at her famed winning of the Divas belt, an obviously manufactured scene which was a mistake. To be selected for such a publicised match, her persona would have to have
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Happy Death Day 2U
The surprising part about Happy Death Day 2U is that little of it is recycled from the first movie but it still retains what looked previously with the sense of humour carrying over. Its more of a fiction science comedy with horror elements thrown in. Jessica Rothe's performance as Tree is fantastic work from physical comedy to drama. She and Israel Broussand still have a lot of chemistry. Both Rachel Matthews and Ruby Modine are perfect in this movie. There are a few flaws. Tree claims that Tombs is dead even through he didn't die in the previous movie's final loop (Lori never got the chance to free him). And the whole AltRyan plot line in
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Alita: Battle Angel
Well, Hollywood have actually managed to get an anime movie right. This is a really good movie. It had heart and soul poured into its story. The action scenes are some of the best I've seen. Alita is a great character, kind-hearted, innocent, naive and protective. Throughout the movie, she grows as a character and learns about sacrifice, loss and love. She is very likeable because she's a good person in a horrible world. Rose Salazar is brilliant as Alita. The level of emotion she gets through the mo-cap is astonishing. Her relationship with Ido and Hugo are built up well. The love interest was done mostly right (aside from the scene where
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Can you fix Wonder Park please?
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Emperor-CatVIHobbyist Digital Artist
Hello again unknownoperative79!

Thanks, again. 
I am very glad to see ya'll support my art 
That's why I have one more favour to ask of you.
 
If it is not too much trouble, can you take some time to subscribe to my youtube channel? 
I want to make it as a freelance artist and I think youtube is the way to go.
That's why if you do subscribe to my channel, don't forget to click the notification icon to get notified whenever I post an art tutorial

I make tutorials because I want to repay your kindness for supporting me :D 
I want to give back to this community

Here is the link : www.youtube.com/channel/UCNlFa… :happybounce:

If you are unsure, I understand. 
I may often come out as too straighforward and I apologize if this comment inconveniences you. 
If you just want a sample of what Kind of tutorials I make, here (face tutorial, step by step) : youtu.be/VeRz3srZ6rk
Thank you again, I really do mean it. And would love to have you join my youtube family, unknownoperative79!
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Thanks for watching. I wish you a good day.
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Thanks a lot for watching and all the faves!
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Thanks for the latest fave!
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Thanks for the FAVE :)