I will offer 5 features to the first 5 people to comment this journal. I will also give a small comment of how you are as an artist and feature some pieces of your work.
This user is a writer, I am not a very big fan of reading, but I did read a piece of his work to know what I should talk about. I won't feature any piece due to the fact I only read one, so it's unfair.
His work seems clean, dynamic in lines and action. I only read one, so probably the step to take is to make it more detailed I think. good luck with your work.
I didn't have much to work with, with your gallery, yet I tried.
I find your cosplay accurate, the only thing that seems to be a bit off about it is the shirt that isn't totally black.
About the fan-fic, in general seemed nice. No mistakes, easy to understand. But it did get me a bot confused the lack of paragraphs to separate lines, making it a bit hard to read (at least for me.)