Silly Twilight, what are you doing. That's a plasmid, not a vigor. Don't worry though. You know, every problem in the world can be solved with a large influx of bees.
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i think if i passed her and saw her freak out over hoof wasps...I wouldn't care what she said or did id just...take her hoof across a log or something
..tie it off...then cut the effected part off...cause I'm CERTIAN if I didn't do that...the parasite would spread all over her body
Good lord. I have to assume this is her personal nightmare, perhaps set off by bees having inhabited Golden Oaks Library. One's home is often synonymous with one's body after all. This seems supported by the fact that the sections inhabited by bees look brown and bark like. They don't seem to be hurting her so much as causing great distress because of their existence. She might also be frightened because holes in pony legs are associated with changelings and she doesn't exactly have fond memories of them prior to their subsequent conversion. All in all, an excellent if highly disturbing piece.
The detail in the hoof, especially with the redness, works very well and is the centre of attention in the peice. The detail and lighting in the hair and horn is amazing and shows depth, but there's no texture in the background and makes the peice look quite plain. Just adding a messy sort of shade would help the peice pop out more. Another small issue I have is how the mouth isn't that detailed and that cheek sticks out a little too much. Apart from those things, I absolutely adore this peice and the expressions used in it! Well done.
The structure on the face and neck could be better. The nose also could be a bit bigger. I would maybe add a second ear and maybe make the horn look more 3D.
Maybe make bees with lines follow not as bright and don't make the tongue as skinny.
Mainly, if i was you, i would work on the overall structure but that way just be the cartoony style.
On the right the hair is very well shaded but the other side on
the darker areas needs more shading.
Possibly make the background more creative, a forest where the bees are from. Possibly shade the mouth bit more..
Overall, the art looks Amazing, EXTREMELY Creative and Original.
The message is clear from the image and it strikes a feeling of stress and horror in the viewer. The overall composition is nice and calls upon the elements of art, however there does seem to be a few aspects that could have been rendered with more care. While the skill is definitely there, I feel as if the artist could have put more time into the piece.
For instance, the shading has been added haphazardly. The light source has been hinted at, however the shadows don't indicate whether the light is dramatic or soft, and the highlights are spotty and uniform.
The details on this image could be improved upon and, though the general idea is still there, with more time and care put into this piece, the artist could very well create a stunning result. As it is, I feel as if it is lacking.
Overall, a decent image. I would encourage the artist to exercise more of their obvious talent and put a little more time and patience into their artwork.
The artist here used a very fair unique skill, And I would have to say, the first time I saw this, It created a really disturbing feeling in me.. with all of those bees all up in her hoof? And With that, the first thing YOU would probably see are her sorely punctured hoofs. That's exactly what a great artist needs to do~ Get a reaction out of the browser. I am really impressed, because this artist really knows how to make a expression on the character they're using for the scene.
Overall a great drawing, with lots of creativity.
This truly is something that makes anyone instantly look at and think about it. It definitely gives off a disturbing vibe not only with the holes in her hoof but also her expression and the bees around her. I was liking the bee that was smiling, seems to be about the only thing even remotely happy XD I also see that the darker gray background has also make Twilight pop out more with the bees. The detail is moderate, and I like it most within the hoof and hair.
In all, this does give us a decently grimdark appearance, but for me I would just say it's Bioshock: DEAL WITH IT. This is definitely one of my favorites, and I can't wait to see more of these vigor/plasmid ponies.