Best Kind of Music

This is a cool and different image, I've definitely never seen these 2 as part of a metal band, and the picture's composition is great. I feel like we're all seeing the exact image you were going for.
I LOVE the lighting effects, you've got a great grasp on those and it really gives things 3 dimensions.
The boots and cuffs were all well lit and showed that they were leather, but I feel like the spikes on Lyra's collar needed a little white glint on the underside.
I was also not sure what Bon Bon's shirt is made of. At first I thought it was a leather jacket, but all of the other leather shines differently, so I think it's a collared shirt, but then the lighting, though soft and cotton-like, creates a surprisingly rigid line down her back, where a soft fabric would wrinkle and fold.
And the last thing, I noticed the piercings and chain didn't get much attention, as those could have been fun and shiny too.

Overall, though, this is a great picture and I still think the outfits look really cool. Keep up the good work!