Bright red
Car doors burning
bright red
with a flash of lightning, yellow
and loud, shouting like injured gazelles,
the kind that screech in your dreams profanities unsuitable for this audience.
The name is Detective Hitler, he says,
and you awake with a start,
and your heart jumps 1400 beats
and you're dead, but death is transient and shallow,
considering that brain tissue in rodents can be reactivated
six hours after cardiac arrest; see citation 1, Charpak and Audinat, 1997.
And the year is 1997,
and you're still dreaming of car doors on fire,
because you have nothing better to do
but sit at home and watch television.
Car bombings in Baghdad and Damascus;
next time you think you better take the bus,
so now you're on the bus
and you see an angry man,
shame-faced, spouting quotable lyrics
"More money, more problems, better believe it he said",
Jay-Z on the bus with Biggie beating terrorists,
being terrorists.
Shame-faced, you run
and boom, blazes, hell,
fire behind you
and car doors,
burning
brig
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