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Wild Hearts Can't Be Broken

I will have to die for this I fear
There's rage and terror and there's sickness here
I fight because I have to
I fight for us to know the truth

There's not enough rope to tie me down
There's not enough tape to shut this mouth
The stones you throw can make me bleed
But I won't stop until we're free
Wild hearts can't be broken

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Wild hearts can't be broken]
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1/60 second
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44 mm
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Oct 16, 2019, 5:04:37 PM
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Yuukon's avatar
I really like how colourful this shot is! The purple really jumps off the screen, making this one interesting to look at. Something I notice though is that the focus seems to be all over the place. I know that focusing is something you're still struggling with, so I wanted to focus this critique on that. The focus seem to try to be on a few of the flowers, but in reality, it's all just out of focus, nothing is particularly sharp. Something I think would be good for you to try is to work with one focus point. In DSLR cameras you can select one certian focus point, and that's what the camera will use, rather than in the automatic setting, where it goes all over the place. If you pick just one, you can just make sure your subject is on that one, and it will be easier to focus. I think it might be good practice for you! You do always know how to pick the right light, as you did with this shot as well. Keep up the work, and keep learning! You've got talent.

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ugnip's avatar
Thank you so much for  your detailed explanation! :tighthug:
I know that focussing is my big issue,
and I think you are right, I should practise more in the manual mode :blushes:
As soon as I have some time and energy I will do that....
Thanks again for taking the time to explain and writing such nice words :heart:
shutterkittyy's avatar
Such lovely blossoms! I especially love how the flowers pop out. 
The angle is quite unique as well, which is great :clap: 
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Sparkle-Photography's avatar
I love the vibrant purple color in the flowers; they seem be to flowing along a gentle breeze. The focus is very good considering all the different focus points there can be in this piece. I would suggest perhaps making it a tone or so brighter and adding a little bit more vibrance/saturation to bring out the greens. Otherwise, excellent! 
ugnip's avatar
Thank you a lot! :hug:
I am glad you liked it
and I appreciate your suggestions!
Eventually, I will try to play around with the editing ;)
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