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Freedom Planet 2 Girls ver 2

Project: Freedom Planet 1: and Freedom planet 2:
The current version of the Freedom Planet 2 girl I'm working on.
The earlier ones can be found here:
  Freedom Planet 2 Girls by TysonTan

Freedom Planet is a indie 2D action game developed by GalaxyTrail:
Lilac, Carol and Milla before Freedom Planet 1 was designed by Ziyo Ling.
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jmalfonso7's avatar
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This is spectacular! I like how each has personality and showing it off in front of the viewers. This artwork is almost as similar as seeing the Powerpuff Girls (90s-2000s) striking a pose while flying in the air! This would be perfect if your promoting this kind of art in an animation studio. One thing that would make this better, is that you can add a background for your three main characters (if you already have one). This would totally add some depth as supposed to why they are flying out of nowhere. And try to imply slight blur effects around them to show some action, like they're popping out from the sky or something.

Overall this is great and keep it up!
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I'll start with the one thing I don't really like and that's their faces. When it comes to anthropomorphic animal characters, I find it best to give them faces that are anatomically similar to that of the real world animal they represent (i.e. prominent, tapered muzzles and snouts, that are appropriately shaped for the particular species). It's alright for their bodies to be more humanoid in form, but their head should still resemble that of a particular, identifiable animal. The simple, flatter, rounded and virtually identical faces that these three characters have, lack originality and make it extremely difficult to determine their species. I mean, I can tell that the girl on the right is a rabbit, because of her ears, but the other two, I really can't say.

Anyway, looking past that, the detail and coloration are truly amazing! Everything down to the gloss and shine of the eyes, hair and certain other details just looks so beautiful and I really love the outfits you've designed for these characters! The proportions and action poses are also quite well executed. I know this is just intended as a reference sheet, showcasing these three characters, but it would be pretty neat to see a version with some sort of background, or backdrop. Wouldn't have to be anything super detailed. A starry sky, maybe?

Anyway, the over technique and execution is great. The colors are great, the proportions are great, the details are great, the textures are great, the only thing I would maybe rethink is the faces.
wheeled-tank's avatar
The one on the right is actually a hound (Her name, Milla Basset, is clearly based off of the Basset Hound). To be fair, unless you have played the game (where the 3 have this style of face), you probably would be confused/not know.

Still, this seems fair enough to me.
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OH MY GOD! I love Freedom Planet so much! I definitely like this style rather than the other one. It kinda has less details but for some reason I think It has more of an animeish blocky-painty style. Milla has always been my personal favorite and I think you did her very very well! The only thing bad I can say about this Is the way you did Lilac's hair. Don't get me wrong, I think everything looks super great! I just think It's a little too thin...? Or maybe that's how her hair always look, I dunno. I think you do Carol nice every time. You just let out that big "I can FEEL It!" sense.
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Lilac's hair does look a bit off, but we don't really see it from the side, and this polygonal style (?) has a tendency to make thin lines look thinner. To me, something seems off with Milla in this style (Still great, but I think Milla's first style was better). That being said, Carol's pose here really compliments her style and personality, and she fits perfectly in this style. As for Lilac, I am kinda stuck with the Smashified look in my head, so it is a bit odd to see her jacket have a purple and blue trim/inner layer, but it still works well
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Despite being a seasoned digital artist, this picture clearly shows your desire to improve and become an even greater artist in your own right. The picture alone shows great progress as well as presenting a potential redesign for these three young ladies since you wanted to compare this to another you made earlier.

Now while I think this is a potentially great all on its own, I cannot help but feel that this is somewhat incomplete as the aforementioned reasons I stated; that this is a process of you wanting improve your as a great artist with a unique style.

All in all, this picture of Sash Lilac, Carol Tea and Milla Basset is simply amazing.
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From what I can see in this, the technique is more rough than what I'd expect. It's rather sharper than the last pic that I saw. Everything about this seems to match with what the director must be going for. You know, a game for kids with no suggestive material whatsoever. It's a piece of work fit for the final product. I can see it as it is meant to be in game. With visuals like this, it's gonna take us to a time in which brings out a peaceful state of mind. From what I can tell, you do really well on your part in giving Galaxy Trail their own identity.
Sparkybonbom27's avatar
I like the one with orange hair
is she a bunny or dog
Skipaaz's avatar
shes a basset hound
KarolusTemplare's avatar
A little late to the party but oh well.

Since the new lilac was shown, I couldn't put my finger on what it was, but there was something I didn't like at all compared to the FP1 design. Pass some years I see it again, and bingo, here it is what: one thing is that the face looks like a bit compressed , but the "worst offender" is the hair. In the old design it was less human hair on a human head and more , how to say it...more whole with the rest of the head,a less abrupt transition. With that difference, It feels like another character, as the head is something that gives a ton of distinctiveness to a character.

I like your style, it's just that the new lilac doesn't do it for me.

TravistheDragon00's avatar
I love your art style! X3

I don't mean to brag but I'm an artist too :3
Bunny-Kirby's avatar
Loving the redesigns. I am already hyping for the second Freedom Planet game. :la:
Esitaro3670's avatar
those are some really cool clothes design there!
Traumkratzer's avatar
This artwork has its wonderful edge, and since it's not polished, it looks great.
Each one of them has its own theme and power, and together with the clothes make them all interesting.
I like it very much.
AaronKasarion's avatar
Very amazing indeed. Removing the purple forehead was a correct choice! I was very irritated that people (aka the Sonic Fanbase) kept calling her a "Sonic OC" even though she's a true character that has nothing to do with the Sonic franchise. Though I am a Sonic fan myself, I still find the Freedom Planet series very amazing. You certainly did an excellent work on this! Keep on going! Sonic Thumbs Up Sonic Thumbs Up Emoticon 
ACEnBEAKY's avatar
Lovely in multiple ways. Lovely because of the attention to detail and bright colors, lovely in the fact that they are pretty girls in their universe, and lovely in a way that's furry but remarkably wholesome. 
The detail is exquisite. You convey that they are in fact very pretty in a girly girl way, but they have a rough and tumble tom boy side to them too, they look like they can handle the rougher parts of their adventure (the athletics I mean, not the torture. Poor girl.) 
But I digress. You've got that feel from Ratchet and Clank, Jak and Daxter, Sly Cooper, the western vibe with the Eastern fashion. 
danlivas's avatar
This is the best version of the redesign. The colors feel more natural.
Now all you have to do is put back the purple forehead as it was in your first redesigns.
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