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Fogtalon TNT APP : Re-Done/ Correction by TyokaYuka Fogtalon TNT APP : Re-Done/ Correction by TyokaYuka
As of 8/28/2016 Fogtalon has died, sickened by greencough but since it was unknown by others he walked outside of camp, laid down, and died with his last few breaths next to a tree. This now leaves his apprentice, Honeypaw, Mentorless... (please tell me if this should be longer, I do plan on drawing an image to match his death) 

.: General Info :.

Clan: Pitchclan

Name: Fogtalon

Previous Names: Fogkit, Fogpaw, (Old Name: Fogpelt)

Nicknames: None Yet

Gender: Male / Tom

Age: 15

Rank: Warrior

Mentor: Former Mentor Flametalon (NPC/ Deceased)

Apprentice: None Given

Helpful- Fogtalon is a very helpful cat, he would love to help as much as he could. But in this case he sometimes try's helping way to much, this often going to him messing things up.

Supportive- Fogtalon loves to support other cats, this includes encouraging kits, newly appointed apprentices, newly appointed warriors and elders. He will say things like, "You can do it!" or "All of the clan knows you can do it!"

Sarcastic- Fogtalon, as an apprentice and newly appointed warrior was very sarcastic. Most of the time when he was told he did something wrong, he would simply respond sarcastically saying "Oh, I knew that." In a slight rude tone.

Know-It-All- Fogtalon was a huge know it all when he was younger, he would pretend he knew what to do every single day. When some-cat got hurt, he would say "I know what to do!" instead of simply taking them to the medicine cat, this often lead him to giving the cats he was with the wrong medicines. Or simply telling the wrong directions knowing that his directions for a "short-cut" was possibly wrong.

Stubborn- Fogtalon is often stubborn as he doesn't want to listen half of the time. This often lead him to taking his own pinion on things and, of course, failing to do what ever was asked of him.

Aggressive-  Fogtalon is an aggressive type, as he could be play fighting with some-cat, this then gets out-of-hand when he starts fighting, and then realize that it's not a real fight. (Truth be told, i'm aggressive IRL)

Fogkit was born with his sibling, Branchkit to Mossbranch and a Kitty-Pet. When Fogkit and Branchkit were born they had assumed kitty-pet blood from the clan not knowing who the father was. Mossbranch was afraid they would be called names for them having "kitty-pet" blood. She was also afraid of them being doubted, and simply told them that they were purebred out of fear, not knowing saying that made it worse for their future. Fogkit had an enjoyable life , along with his sister Branchkit, but along the line, 4 moons later Mossbranch was pregnant again and gave birth to 4 kits, all of unknown gender. He had fun with those kits and soon enough he and his sister went to the apprentice den.

When Fogkit and Branchkit became Fogpaw and Branchpaw, he made a friend that eventually became his best friend, and his name was Ghostpaw. Ghostpaw, Branchpaw, and him often liked patrolling with each other, this was also Fogpaw's time of his life when he was feeling really devoted to his warrior duty's. His story then gets upsetting, for some reason he never saw his mother around, and his littermates about 2 moons later. He felt weird for not noticing and got upset, but Branchpaw and Ghostpaw cheered him up, telling him that his mother probably wanted to give the kits a look of their father. Then after that 2 more moons later, there was only one moon left for Ghostpaw to become a warrior, but that went downhill, on the morning Ghostpaw was telling them about being a warrior he was called to go hunting with his mentor, but got sadly killed by a badger. Fogpaw and Branchpaw were really upset, this lead to them caring less, but luckily they had Flametalon that had watched over them and cared for them.

(I forgot! Sorry!)
When Fogpaw became Fogtalon, and Branchpaw became Branchstripe, they were quite proud, they both knew that their mother would have been proud of them, and their littermates too.When Fogtalon was officially a warrior he couldn't help but think about his future, as which it still continues today. But then something had happened, his mentor, Flametalon, had been killed by a badger. This was found out by another clan member that looked for him since he hadn't been back for a long time. There was a mention that the tracks were weak and that all of Flametalon's wounds had killed him. This made Fogtalon depressed, but yet again his sister had cheered him up, and made him happy. He just now remembers that Flametalon and Ghostpaw are watching in Starclan. 

-Fogtalon was born to Mossbranch, his father was a kitty pet (assumed).
-Mossbranch was quite excited about Fogkit's and Branchkit's birth, she had wanted kits for a long time. The father never got to react as he never saw his kits.
- Fogkit and his sister got along well with their mother. Their mother often Played "games" with them, along with giving them bathes and telling stories.
-Fogkit's only sibling was Branchkit, a light brown she cat with dark brown lynx markings. The littermates consisted of the litter before him
(all died at birth) and the litter that is born 4 moons after has 4 kits. 
-Fogkit was always playing with Branchkit, they loved each other and were basically not seen without each other. As for Fogkit's younger littermates, they couldn't play for the first moon of their life, but after 1 more moon, they joined Fogkit and Branchkit in their adventures.
-Fogkit showed some of his spirit of being a warrior around 3 moons. He in fact says something about being a warrior, he told himself "When I become a warrior I want my name to show my fierceness and my ability to hide!"
-As a kit , He and his siblings, and littermates went on adventures inside of the camp, often pretending to be leaders and warriors, and going on patrols and hunts. They often learned went to the elders when it was time to go back to the nursery, and they listened to the elders stories of when they were kits, apprentices, and warriors.

-Fogpaw's mentor was Flametalon.
-Flametalon often tried getting along with Fogpaw, as he was somewhat stubborn to listen to him. But Fogpaw eventually got to listen to and learn something.
-Fogpaw was really bad at hunting, instead of landing on a prey target, he would land next to it, and watch it while it ran away. But this quickly was brought up as he doesn't chase away as much prey as he did the first time of being an apprentice.
-He was good at swimming. (Their is a swamp in Pitchclan right?) Fogpaw has taught himself, amazingly, how to swim, but his swimming had been rusty since he hasn't swam in a while.
-He had a best friend, his name was Ghostpaw (NPC/ Deceased). they had lots of their outside adventures together. 
-Fogpaw liked patrolling the most, as he felt more like a warrior when he did this. He also loved his swimming, but he would mostly try doing it in private.

-Fogtalon had now gotten used to hunting, but his heart was still devoted to swimming. He would try to get in any place to get in to water       (but not daring to go across the territories for it.). And  when hes not swimming or hunting he will find the sunniest place in Pitchclan and lay in that part of the grass/ground. 

May be during any stage:
-Fogtalon's best-friend and mentor, he was deeply saddened by this. (He trust's himself of knowing that his littermates and mother are safe.)
-Branchstripe, She was also sad but knew she had to be there for her brother, that was until they no longer needed each other.

.: Physical Info :.

Fur: Gray (25%) , Gray (50%), Gray (80%), White, and Dark Grey/ Light Black
Eyes: Yellow - Gold
Fur Type: Medium length fur, that is slightly rough
Build: Muscular Legs and Shoulders, Broad looking face
Scent: He smells like reeds
Size: Large
Breed: Maine Coon Moggy

.: Sexuality Info :.

Orientation: Bisexual
Preferences: Both, as of right now
Looking For: a small cat he could easily take car of

.: Kin :.

Mother: Mossbranch
Father: Assumed Kitty-Pet
Siblings: Branchpaw/ Branchstripe

Mate: None
Kits: None

.: Stats :. 

Total points [not including the senses/ stealth]:
  -Kit: 20 (average of 3 on each skill, but hunting and fighting should be no more than 1)
    -New Apprentice: 25 (when kit turns 6 moons old)
    -Apprentice: 30 (7-9 moons)
    -Old Apprentice: 36 (10-12)
    -Warrior: 41
    -Deputy or warriors over the age of 5 years (60 moons): 46
    -Leader: 50
    -Leader over the age of 6 years (72 moons): 55
    -Elders: Agility, endurance, speed, and strength all go down by at least one, Intelligence goes up by 2

Strength: 8/10
Speed: 7/10
Hunting: 5/10
Fighting: 6/10
Intelligence: 7/10
Endurance: 5/10
Agility: 3/10

Eyesight: 10/10
Smell: 8/10
Hearing: 8/10
Stealth: 7/10

Strengths: Stalking, Climbing, and Swimming
Weaknesses: Stealth, Smelling (Mistakes cats for other cats), and Agility 

.: Other :.

Likes: Kits and Apprentices, listening to elders stories, helping other cats
Dislikes: Hurt cats, seeing others get taunted, loud places (exception of gatherings)

Theme Song: None Yet

He does not know his father but he possibly does, Fogtalon distinctly remembers a brown Maine Coon.
He wishes to have at least 3 kits.
His littermates names were Dullkit, Hawkkit, Yellowkit, and Brownkit
.: Relationships :.
Bullet; White- His father
Bullet; PurpleBullet; PurpleBullet; Purple- Mossbranch
Bullet; PurpleBullet; PurpleBullet; Purple- Branchstripe
Bullet; GreenBullet; GreenBullet; Green- Ghostpaw
Bullet; OrangeBullet; OrangeBullet; Orange- Flametalon
Bullet; Purple - Dullkit
Bullet; Purple - Hawkkit
Bullet; Purple- Yellowkit
Bullet; Purple- Brownkit
:star: - Honeypaw


Bullet; White = Doesn't Know Well
Bullet; WhiteBullet; White = Curious About
Bullet; WhiteBullet; WhiteBullet; White = Sort of a Friend

Bullet; Green = Likes
Bullet; GreenBullet; Green = Friend
Bullet; GreenBullet; GreenBullet; Green = Best Friend

Bullet; Blue = Pity For
Bullet; BlueBullet; Blue = Ex Crush
Bullet; BlueBullet; BlueBullet; Blue = Ex Mate

Bullet; Purple = Related To
Bullet; PurpleBullet; Purple = Adopted Family Member 
Bullet; PurpleBullet; PurpleBullet; Purple = Family

Bullet; Pink = Slight Crush
Bullet; PinkBullet; Pink = Average Crush
Bullet; PinkBullet; PinkBullet; Pink = Huge Crush

Bullet; Red = Lust
Bullet; RedBullet; Red = Loves
Bullet; RedBullet; RedBullet; Red = Would Die For

Bullet; Orange = Respect
Bullet; OrangeBullet; Orange = Looks Up To
Bullet; OrangeBullet; OrangeBullet; Orange = Idolizes

Bullet; Yellow = Suspicious
Bullet; YellowBullet; Yellow = Nervous Around
Bullet; YellowBullet; YellowBullet; Yellow = Terrified Of

Bullet; Black = Dislikes
Bullet; BlackBullet; Black = Hates
Bullet; BlackBullet; BlackBullet; Black = Wants Dead

Star! = Apprentice

Rose = Mate

Black Rose = Former Mate

Name = Dead

Death = Murdered

By the due date all your applications must include 
-Your character's current Name, Age, and Rank
-An updated history including lived through events in that clan, This including the major desert move



CURRENT: Fogtalon, 16 moons, Warrior
Update on History: 

Credit: TyokaYuka
Made by the Lovely ysabeau-wolf
Application Picture (c) Rightful Owner
The-New-Territories (c) TheCatsPupil and SonicSans
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RisingSunYamamoto98 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well shall we rp the mentor/apprentice? :)
TyokaYuka Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2016  Student General Artist
but in notes please!
RisingSunYamamoto98 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ok! ^^
TheCatsPupil Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2016  Student Digital Artist
Honeypaw is your new apprentice c:
TyokaYuka Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2016  Student General Artist
QueenVivi Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aah what a cutie ;D
Up for a RP sometime with Luckypaw?
TyokaYuka Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2016  Student General Artist
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