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Brokenbite: Sharkclan Application by TyokaYuka Brokenbite: Sharkclan Application by TyokaYuka
Name: Brokenbite
Gender: Male
Clan: Sharkclan
Rank: Warrior (auditioning for deputy) 
Description: Brokenbite is a brown classic tabby Manx cat with blue eys, two spots on his body (both sides) has light brown on the inside (leg and arm). He has a scarred muzzle giving a slight appearance of being ''broken'' at a side, the huge scar on his mouth is only on his right side. Brokenbite's has symmetrical markings (excluding mouth), and brown pawpads/ nose.
Personality: Brokenbite is a nice clam, yet aggressive cat. He often stares at the sunrise/ sunset in his free time when he is not busy with anything. Brokenbite is a cat that will give his best respect to every-cat and expects some back from other cats. He is also rather caring about cats and often wants to watch over them when sick or hurt.
Family:
NPCs 
Parents- Milkmist and Sharppelt
-Siblings: Soothepaw
-Mate/Crush: None Yet
-Kits: None Yet
History: 
KITHOOD
3 kits were born to Milkmist and Sharppelt, though during their, birth 2 kits died. These kits were known as Brokenkit's dead littermates, and for the parents mourning of the kits they named him 'broken' for their broken hearts. They both taught Brokenkit about Self_Respect and Respect to other cats, they also taught him to care for many things around him. They made sure that their single kit wouldn't turn out wrong and wanted a good life for him. Brokenkits life in fact was good for him, he enjoyed spent his kithood like any other kit, he played with other kits, listened to stories, and got in trouble. Then when the day came, he became an apprentice.
 APPRENTICESHIP
(This mostly tells about his scars)
Brokenkit on his apprenticeship officially became Brokenpaw, him and his parents were quite proud and excited for him. Brokenpaw looked around the camp in happiness, to only get scratched on the muzzle by a passing she-cat. She was only about 2 moons older than him but had heard of certain cats getting held back for reasons, she was one of them. This gave him part of his jaw scar. He turned to tell her "what did I do?" to only get a rude response, this made her his first bully. Brokenpaw worked like any other apprentice, training and learning side-by-side, but he did not dare tell on that passing she-cat, to only know that she was going to get worse with him.

A moon has passed since the apprenticeship and he was told to go out and hunt with their mentors, he didn't know that the mentors were friends. This lead to bringing, that apprentice, Berrypaw. Brokenpaw noticed her right away from that scratch that was given and Brokenpaw being in all respect tried making friends with Berrypaw. She simpily ignored him, and Brokenpaw decided to leave her alone for now to listen to their mentors, they were told to hunt and come back to this spot. With them watching closely of course. This is where the rest of the scars come in. Berrypaw asked Brokenpaw to come with her, he thought she was finally being nice but was wrong.

He sat down in slight excitement and waited. Berrypaw sat away from Brokenpaw, then getting up slowly to only see a quick rush and get scratched severely along the right-side of his mouth. Berrypaw smiled in Brokenpaws face saying that maybe his jaw is something to be broken instead of hearts. Brokenpaw didn't react quick enough to the movements and didn't see the blow. This was it, he was going to finally fight his one bully, (I don't want to get violent so I won't write this part), in the end the mentors finally heard the yowling due to their pain, and came running. Berrypaw had her face scratched and Brokenpaw had his jaw scratched. Since this happened most cats couldn't believe it  and as punishment they were held back for 3 moons making apprenticeship longer delaying a warrior ceremony. But Brokenpaw had high hopes and knew that he will never give up to be a warrior, he was going to make his dream true. 

WARRIOR
3 moons had passed since the delay, Brokenpaw was ready to become a warrior. He was called forward during the ceremony, and received his name, he was now Brokenbite. The she cat was right, he was going to be named after his features, but he didn't care. He knew that he was also named for the strength of his jaw.

((I forgot but I'm still thinking))



Role-play Example:  Brokenkit looked at his future apprentice buddies playing in the area in front of him, they had 2 more moons before becoming apprentices. They were pretending to be warriors, that was a classic kits game after all, but Brokenkit was wondering so much about his future he didn't really play like he normally would. Milkmist looked at Brokenkit with a worrying look, he turned around before she said anything and meowed 

"I'm okay mama, I was just thinking what would happen if..."

Brokenkit was shushed softly by Milkmist. She knew what he was going to say, he said this every other day.

"Just don't worry about" she softly licked his head. "the time will come and then you will know what to do."

Relationships:
Bullet; White  - Acquaintance.
Bullet; Blue - Friend.
Bullet; Yellow - Good Friend.
Bullet; Pink - Crush.
Bullet; Red - Love.
Bullet; Black - Hate/Discomfort.
Bullet; Orange Dislike.
Bullet; Purple - Mixed Feelings.

RPed by: :dev tyokayuka : 
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:iconleequor:
Leequor Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist

Since this boi is deputy 
Would you mind rping with Swampstar?
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TyokaYuka Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2016  Student General Artist
sure thing! 
notes please! 
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Leequor Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist

Sent!
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TyokaYuka Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2016  Student General Artist
alrighty!
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HeyYew Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Congrats, its official now, Brokenbite is deputy ^^
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TyokaYuka Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2016  Student General Artist
yay!
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HeyYew Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It occurs to me to say he's accepted as a warrior currently- you can go around and RP if you like. He may or may not end up the deputy. So for now you can just RP him and just kinda avoid mentioning that piece and you'll be fine ^^

Though if you want to have him become deputy may want to add a few sentences about his warriorhood to kinda show why they made him deputy. His apprenticehood may have been quite awhile ago, but even so. 
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TyokaYuka Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2016  Student General Artist
alright! I just wanted to show how he got his scar and if it wasn't good I would change it...
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HeyYew Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Naw, that part is good. Just kinda wondering if you might want to add a bit more about his warriorhood. Could be as little as a sentence saying that he proved himself to be a good warrior and that's why he was picked as deputy ^^
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TyokaYuka Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2016  Student General Artist
yuper! thats what im gonna do!

me writing that fight was intense it was going to be more violent but...
ehh...
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HeyYew Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Feel free if you want XD You could put a Mature warning in the title if you're worried.
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TyokaYuka Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2016  Student General Artist
i think that would be fine!
I will!
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IcantdrawOwO Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I like it fam gl
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TyokaYuka Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2016  Student General Artist
huh?
thank you!
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